Reviews (13)

Ice Queen · 12 April 2005 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Update! Update! Update! Pleeeeeeeeease!

Nienna · 5 July 2004 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Here it is, from Ch 4: Aragorn nodded and at once turned to find his way to the guest quarters, where they had stayed both in times of war and in times of peace. Aragorn did not meet his eyes as he went, and Legolas knew that if Aragorn had looked at him, he would have seen fully the responsibility Aragorn carried upon him. I think the last Aragorn should be Eomer.

Nienna · 5 July 2004 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

In addition to the witty bit about Gimli and Galadriel, I liked the scene between Leggy and the gossipy servant. One could almost believe that the messengers were not what they seemed . . . again. Nice, scary touch. ;) There is a paragraph I found confusing. In the last chapter, when the bad news is delivered at Edoras: after the lie is discredited, and Eomer is moving past denial. Aragorn's name appears frequently in the paragraph, when I think you meant to say "Aragorn is wondering what he (Eomer) is thinking." I hope that there is more. Nienna

Dan · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

This is really good, especially your portrayal of Eomer - good character detail, please finish the story !!

purrlin@hotkey.net.au · 26 March 2004 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Please... I don't know why you haven't continued with your story...I'm hoping that you have suffered some sort of writers bloke and not something more sinister... I'm am now so totally heart broken, having read your story to this point, that my mind has started to make up its own following story and I'm not happy at how that makes my heart quail. Please put all our minds, and hearts, at rest. purrlin :)

Rebecca · 27 February 2004 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Hello. I just discovered this fic today, and I can't help but notice that you seem to have abandoned it. Please, please, don't do that! I have rarely come across a fanfic so well-written. Your characterizations are perfect. That is almost impossible to do with Tolkien's characters. And in any case, I really am dying to know what happens to Eowyn, and I can't wait until you get Gimli and the hobbits into the mix as well--I wonder how Merry will react to news of his sword-sister's capture? I'm sorry this review is so short, I'm afraid I'm just going out the door, but PLEASE do me a favour and continue writing this story. Please? I promise I'll leave you a long, super-detailed review if you do! Please?

powerwriter · 27 December 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

This is an awesome story and very well written. I like how it was in three parts then it came together. Very creative plot. Please continue with it!

vinyalondiel · 30 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

ohh, if Aragorn finds out that it was wormtounge(at least I think it is) he will feel really responsible because he allowed him to live...eek I am rambling now! Please continue on with this story,it's really well written and I need to know what happens.

helen · 10 October 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

wow this story is really wel done(and sad sniff)I can't wait till the next chapter update

Rose Gamgee · 23 August 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Sorry it took me so long to review! I'm still loving this story. Seeing Éomer fall apart like that was just heartwrenching. . . but I was glad for the few lighthearted moments that Legolas provided. "'And you know that Gimli did just wed Galadriel and I meant to bring them a gift for their betrothal,'" Gotta love the elf. ;-) Will we get to read a bit from Éowyn's point-of-view? I'm dying to know what's going on with her! You've gotten me addicted to this story - please update it as soon as possible!

Leah · 18 August 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

Wow! Great story. I love a really good original plot. It adds a nice mix to the usual stories you read, and let me tell you, you have one of the best. I can't wait to read more. Hopefully Faramir won't die. It was so cute how upset he was over the kiddnapping, I mean of course he was upset but you could just tell how much he loves her. Keep up the great work.

chris · 18 August 2003 · Chapter 5: Falling Darkness

wow! stunning story! what a gripping tale - your writing is very impressive and your story original and well thought-out - i'm really looking forward to reading more:)

Rose Gamgee · 16 August 2003 · Chapter 3: An Oath Sworn

Ohhhh man . . . this story is amazing! It only took me a few paragraphs to fall in love with your writing style. It's very eloquent and dramatic. And you've got a wonderful grasp of the characters - how they speak, how they act and react. And sheesh, Faramir . . . your descriptions gave me a perfect visual of him, looking so much like his brother. It broke my heart to read about him. ". . . his fingers curled into the dirt below him in an agony that had nothing to do with arrows." Just tragic. My only complaint in this story is the fact that Gimli hasn't showed up yet, but I'll be patient. ;-) This is excellent, I can't wait to read more!