mirthor · 2 March 2005 · Chapter 1: Broken
nice.
Author's reply
thanks :)
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Lindelea · 2 March 2005 · Chapter 1: Broken
Very nice. I'm not much of a judge of poetry, but this speaks to me, especially the jarring repetition of
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Author's reply
Thank you. I'm not much of a writer of poetry, but I'm glad the repetition worked.