Voices of Middle-Earth by Armariel
Larner · 13 October 2014 · Chapter 47: Luthien's Song
Once again, how lovely. Luthien certainly helped carry on the tale of tales, the one that in the end caught up Hobbits of the Shire into the doings of the great and mighty, and she did it for love.
Larner · 13 October 2014 · Chapter 46: Rosie's Song (Rosie)
How sweet and proper as she looks forward to Sam's return! Beautiful, Armariel, and how wonderful to see this collection added to once more!
Adonnen Estenniel · 13 April 2011 · Chapter 46: Pendant (Gimli)
Absolutely fantastic! I love the rhythm and word-choice here, as well as the unique perspective on Gimli. Dwaves and poetry often don't seem to work well together, but here I thought they fit wonderfully. Excellent work.
Author's reply
Thanks Adonnen! After reading Gimli's description of the Caves, there could be no doubt in my mind that he had poetry in his soul. Which perhaps made him unique among dwarves! ~~~~~{~@
shirebound · 13 April 2011 · Chapter 46: Pendant (Gimli)
That is absolutely beautiful.
Author's reply
Thank you Shirebound! Had this bunny in my head for a long time, I think it was Larner who put it there in the first place! So it was only fitting that it finally came out for her. ~~~~~{~@
Kara's Aunty · 10 November 2008 · Chapter 17: A Morning of Pale Spring (Faramir)
Hello, how perfectly beautiful! Such a joy to read this expressive poem of Faramir's hope & love for Eowyn. Excellent work! M :)
Minimus Prime · 3 November 2008 · Chapter 26: To Be Alone (Galadriel)
I have returned to this poem often in the long time since I first read it, and I cannot accurately describe to you the depth of my admiration for this work. As someone whose favorite character(s) tend to be written about rather rarely, I really appreciate how well you captured such a profound part of who I think is such an amazing character. The second stanza is, in my opinion, so striking in its frankness and so well crafted overall, and it leaves me with just the right kind of feeling after reading a lovely, yet melancholy, poem. Well done.
Larner · 1 November 2008 · Chapter 24: Answers (Frodo)
How did I ever manage to miss this one, Armariel? Oh, but as I always love your poetry, this is beautiful and fills my heart. I miss your writing so!
Violin Ghost · 11 May 2008 · Chapter 1: Upon Meeting Arwen (Aragorn)
Been a really long time since this was posted, but wow! I had to review. It was lovely, so lyrical, and your descriptions had a unique beauty of their own. Though decidedly freeverse, I still feel that it could fit in quite well with Tolkien's own writings. Lovely! :)
Author's reply
Thanks Violin Ghost! I really need to get back into the swing...maybe I will one of these days....... Thanks for reviewing! hugs Armariel ~~~~{~@
Mairi · 17 September 2007 · Chapter 45: Tryst (Arwen)
Those- all of them- were amazing. Wonderful images and writing. I just had a thought, though- would it be possible for you to reorder them so that they went in the order that they occured in?
Author's reply
Hi Mairi, thanks for reviewing! Well, I don't think I could reorder them without losing all the reviews and hit counts, etc. and besides, the collection is open to being added onto at any time the mood and the muse strikes me, so the order in which they now appear is simply the order in which they were written. On my website, however, I do have them grouped according to which character is speaking and on each character's page, they do appear in order of occurrance. (Which reminds me, I need to add some of them on soon!) Thanks once again for the feedback! ~~~~{~@
Larner · 2 September 2007 · Chapter 44: Fireworks (Bilbo)
Do a search under Bodkin for her story about the New Years celebration. Elladan, Elrohir, and Legolas become determined the Elves of Aman need to appreciate the sacrifices that led to the final victory against Sauron. I think you will like it.
Author's reply
Thanks, I will! ~~~~{~@
Larner · 2 September 2007 · Chapter 45: Tryst (Arwen)
Now, that is right between erotic and esoteric! Very interesting imagery there.
Author's reply
Could you tell I'd been reading Neruda? "Right between erotic and esoteric" describes his love poetry perfectly. I was making a wallpaper and wanted a poem for it, or some lines from one, but I wished for one by a female poet this time, and was puzzling over where to find an appropriate one. Then I said to myself, "Well, YOU'RE a female poet, aren't you? Write one yourself!" So I did! lol Thanks for commenting! ~~~~{~@
Pearl Took · 8 July 2007 · Chapter 34: Please Come Back....(Pippin)
This is beautiful. Amazingly concise yet full of emotion. Wonderful!!
Author's reply
Coming from one who writes Pippin so beautifully, that is great praise. Thanks millions! ~~~~{~@
Antane · 7 July 2007 · Chapter 44: Fireworks (Bilbo)
Man, where do you come up with such beautiful things? Poetry came much easier to me when I was a Star Wars fanatic but it doesn't now. What a loving tribute not only to Gandalf and his gifts but one of the greatest gifts Iluvatar bestowed upon Bilbo and all Middle-earth. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Doesn't come easy to me, Dearie;) and I think I got the idea of this one from you, at least indirectly, when I teased you about having something about Gandalf's fireworks in your story...then I thought, well, why don't I write a piece about the fireworks--so there you have it! lol I was also thinking about Sam's remark that there should have been a verse about the fireworks in the Elves' lament, and he came up with one himself which wasn't very good and he knew it...and so I thought to make one also. Glad it ended up being a halfway decent effort! And I bet you can make nice poetry, it just takes practice, lots of it, and a lot of reading of good poetry and some study of the mechanics. C'mon, you can do it;);) Thanks for commenting! hugs Armariel ~~~{~@
Baggins Babe · 7 July 2007 · Chapter 6: The Bridge (Sam)
I've been meaning to review this for ages. It is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read and expresses the sentiment perfectly. How wonderful that Sam can sometimes 'visit' Frodo - truly a gift from the Valar I think. Now I must ask you something. I have a story (half-written) which was inspired by this story, but obviously I ask your permission before posting. It sprang into my head the first time I read this poem and would not let go.
Author's reply
Ooo wow, thanks! I always had a problem with those two not having any communication whatsoever and just had to come up with a way...perhaps Irmo Lord of Dreams might have had a hand in arranging occasional "visits" for them, although I felt that such could have its risks as well, rather like too many sleeping pills or pick-me-ups, they could get addictive and should be used very sparingly and only at need. Please do post your story, I would love to see it. And if it wouldn't let go, then most likely it was meant to be. I'm flattered to be the inspiration! Thanks once more! ~~~{~@
Larner · 6 July 2007 · Chapter 44: Fireworks (Bilbo)
Last year it was Bodkin who made my day with Frodo represented by a great firework; this year it's you. Thank you for this tribute to our Fourth and Bilbo and Frodo's glorious legacy of transient yet lasting beauty.
Author's reply
Why, you are most welcome, and thank YOU for the comments! I don't remember ever reading such a thing by Bodkin, but I would like very much to see it. (Bodkin does write beautifully!) I liked the idea of someone's inner magic being symbolized by the exuberant liberation of flaming colors and shapes across the night sky that fill viewers with childlike delight. Just wish I'd come up with it sooner, but promptness has never been any longsuit of mine, unfortunately.......... Thanks once more! ~~~{~@
eiluj · 6 July 2007 · Chapter 44: Fireworks (Bilbo)
An interesting juxtaposition of two of Bilbo's loves. I know I can never get enough of either one of them! In line 6, did you want "candies" or "candles"?
Author's reply
Yes, that's "candies"...although I suppose "candles" could work also. I thought "sky candy" or "eye candy" in terms of fireworks, along with the "toys of flame" that delight both children and adults. I think I can't get enough either!:D Thanks for commenting. ~~~{~@
Larner · 5 May 2007 · Chapter 43: Somewhere a Ship (Frodo)
YES! Yes! Sam and Frodo reunited, and both fulfilled, the time of waiting now seen only as that moment of anticipation before the eternal hug of welcome!
Antane · 5 May 2007 · Chapter 43: Somewhere a Ship (Frodo)
Wow! Hantanyel! Namarie, God bless, Melinyel, Antane :)
Antane · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 42: My Treasure (Sam)
A loving reunion anticipated. Sam has written about his treasure, now you'll need to write about Frodo anticipating his. :) Love the idea of the treasure chest of memories and knocking each other over in their joy, hearts bumping into each other and the ending. Of course there would be no hesitation there or lack of recognition. How can you not recognize your heart and soul as it runs to you and you to it? Have you read Hope by Trilliah? It's much like this. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Thanks for the idea;) although I dare say Frodo would have said pretty much the same things...perhaps in more sophisticated diction, since in my universe he is a poet. I may have read Hope by Trilliah--title or name seems familiar--but don't remember. I've read scadoodles of stories and poems on the subjecto f the Reunion, and will probably eventually write my own....and you KNOW my take on it will be vastly different from the others;) This one was really for you, y'know:D Probably should have said so but what the heck. hugs Armariel~~~{~@
Queen Galadriel · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 42: My Treasure (Sam)
Hello again! Just read the poem that you said you wrote to your best friend, and it made me cry. Seriously. That is so sweet! God bless, Galadriel
Author's reply
Thanks again! Don't you love when you have that effect on your reader(s)? xoxx RoZ~~~{~@
Queen Galadriel · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 42: My Treasure (Sam)
Awwww! *smiles hugely* I just love it, Armariel, I love it! Your poetry is amazing; the feelings you convey are so real and vivid. I love the imagery of the treasure boxes and the whole thing is just so wonderful and right! God bless, Galadriel
Author's reply
Thanks Dearie! I'm sure it worked because the feelings conveyed here were very much my own--as you've figured out by now! hugs Armariel~~~{~@
Larner · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 42: My Treasure (Sam)
This one has me weeping, and I mean that literally, Armariel. I can so see this, just as I have imagined Sam murmuring, over and over, "Oh, my Frodo" as that meeting comes ever and ever closer, and as they each offer the treasure chests of memories to one another, and as Frodo once again knows the great, enduring pleasure of being a Hobbit of the Shire, though he left that Shire so long ago. Thank you for this one.
Author's reply
Wow, I love when I have that effect--don't you? You are most welcome Dearie! I admit I cheated a little with this one. I stole a bit from a poem I wrote for my best friend a few years ago as a birthday gift. Decided that poem was a little too feminine in its viewpoint for Sam, however, so I just put in the part about the treasure box. I think this one is better, however: Our Jewels When we meet again it will be like the first time even if we are much older we’ll still see with young eyes that penetrate the lacy wall which veils you from my sight. Through that snowy curtain I’ll step into your gaze the silver air around us will shiver with delight. Once more we’ll walk through innocent grass in a warm and singing wood past yards all wreathed in wonder on paths that kiss our feet. We’ll look at each new flower while the lacy curtains dance in the joyful breeze and fairies giggle in the mist. A treasure box we’ll open examining every gem holding each up to the light saying, "Do you remember this?" The colors will laugh with us. The day will linger stubbornly like a child that would stay up all night. But if we do not meet again if the day is not to be ours our hearts will still grasp through the lace ignoring the chains and the miles. We’ll tend each other’s flowers and shine on each new bloom stars will continue to twinkle on each hour of our meeting for midnight cannot darken the colors of our jewels.
Larner · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 41: White are the Stars (Frodo)
Oh, how appropriate for Frodo as he has found himself once more, and as he rejoices once more to find life worth living! I'm sorry I don't know that particular hymn--I'll have to seek it out and see if I can find it.
Author's reply
Yes, I considered the hymn his ultimate celebration of his new life and wonder at his new-found joy and faith. I wanted to fit it to "Brightest and Best" which has long been one of my favorite carols but it wouldn't quite work that way. Here are the words (Sorry there's no music file, maybe I can make one soon.): Brightest and Best ~~~{~@
cookiefleck · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 42: My Treasure (Sam)
This is marvelous, and so joyful. Thank you!
Author's reply
Thank YOU for commenting, cookiefleck! Guess I am a little excited at the moment myself;);) hugs ~~~{~@
Larner · 22 April 2007 · Chapter 40: To the One Far Away (Sam)
How very gentle this one. That Sam might think Frodo would feel bereft and lost is a great grief; and it could also easily be said by Frodo of his beloved Bilbo or even Rosie of her Sam, somewhere that one Yule, lost out there in the fearful wilderness she has heard tell of outside the boundaries of the Shire. Very lovely.
Author's reply
Yes, by any of them, surely. I said it myself of my niece one Christmas when she was seemingly lost to us, but she has been found again. Still far away, but now we know where she is and that she will come back again. Thanks bunches! ~~~{~@