Forever by Lindelea
Antane · 8 March 2009 · Chapter 1: Forever
Sweet indeed and loving as only hobbits can do! Yes, Merry will have another bestest friend soon and Frodo will another bestest himself and the four will be together forever even when apart. Thank you. Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Oh, how difficult that separation must have been, even with their hearts so knit together. Or maybe especially so. Thanks!
Nienor Niniel · 30 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Forever
The "heir business" from the other perspective... I really like how you make a connection between those pairs of cousins, and I think Frodo is very good at handling Merry's grief. Greetings, Nienor
Author's reply
I always figured there had to be a deep love between the cousins, for Pippin and Merry to follow Frodo to the ends of the earth. Thanks!
Hobbit Lass21 · 1 May 2005 · Chapter 1: Forever
Aw...the sweetness! The sweet hobbit-ness! It's almsot mroe than i cna stand...I'm actually tearing up...how sweet....I love this relationship between Merry and Frodo, simply, simply love it!
Author's reply
Aw, thanks for the review. I apologise for the very belated reply, but I never saw this until just now.
Inkling · 22 March 2005 · Chapter 1: Forever
I was looking through your story list for young Frodo and Merry fics and this caught my eye... This is so endearing, Lin, without being cloying…always something I appreciate in stories of hobbit children! There are some strikingly similiar scenes in later chapters of my WIP. I especially liked this glimpse of a young child’s fears and limited understanding: …death had looked just like sleep... he'd not gone to sleep, the first time he'd seen death. This is just how a child thinks; I remember for a long time one of my sons had a huge fear of being buried alive. Well done as usual!
Author's reply
Well, then, I look forward to reading your WIP! Thanks!
MaidenofValinor · 12 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Forever
That was almost too adorable to be allowed! I love the part about a new cousin being born! Merry is so adorable and Frodo is so sweet! Great job!
Author's reply
Thanks! (Just saw this review, sorry for the delay in answering)
Miriel · 28 August 2003 · Chapter 1: Forever
Hooray for a sweet little Merry story. All I ussually see are little Pippins. Thank you. It was very sweet. :)
Woman of the Dunedain · 9 August 2003 · Chapter 1: Forever
How cute! I'd never really stopped to consider that Frodo and Merry were close before he moved to Hobbiton. Your descriptions are really nice, and for the most part you capture hobbit innocence nicely. ^_^