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CoYlEnhyrg · 31 May 2012 · Chapter 4: IV

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LadyMorrigan87 · 21 February 2006 · Chapter 5: V

I loved it. It was so sad yet so beautiful. I love how Olorin describe Finwe and Feanor. Amazing!!!

Ariel · 13 May 2005 · Chapter 5: V

A lovely, heartfelt little story. I don't normally read elf stuff, but you make it so that even a little hobbit like me can read and enjoy it. Thank you!

Redheredh · 12 May 2005 · Chapter 5: V

Very nice ending which I am very glad you finally posted. Very romantic and not as bittersweet as I expected it would be. I like that it was Nienna who provided the best advice to Olorin and that he was able to use it. And the writing itself was also a pleasure to read.

Ariel · 5 March 2005 · Chapter 0: Prologue and I

See? I am reading. This is not my usual fare, but it is well written and interesting to read. I like the idea of Gandalf having known love. Consider me a romantic at heart, but I am fond of playing matchmaker for the Fellowship - at least those who don't have their romances exlored in canon. This is quite enjoyable.

Redheredh · 27 February 2005 · Chapter 3: III

This is so enjoyable. You certainly make one see that there might have been another reason why, when the Istari came to Middle-earth, that they took on the shape of wise *old* men. With this long ago experience in learning how to have genuine affection for individuals, you also show why Gandalf is so endearing to his friends.

meckinock · 25 February 2005 · Chapter 3: III

I don't think I can stand to see Olorin get his heart broken! His self-consciousness and childlike anticipation before showing himself to Erimien were sweet, but his deflation and confusion as she brushed him off and walked away made me groan with sympathy. I suppose that despite his agelessness and wisdom, he really is a kid with his first crush. The camaraderie between Gandalf and Elrond is very nicely done. I don't think I've ever seen such a warm and insightful look at Gandalf as a person before, and this story is especially intriguing because you're giving us a peek at the primeval and untarnished being that became the Gandalf we know. It's captivating to watch him learn about attraction and emotion.

elliska · 24 February 2005 · Chapter 3: III

Poor Gandalf! That struck me as very dear. Seeing him worrying about his physical form and then wondering how he'd explain who he was and then being completely speechless when he finally gets a chance to speak to her. I suppose we whould all be happy to see that Maia don't do any better than the rest of us. :) I am really enjoying 'young' inexperienced Gandalf.

daw the minstrel · 24 February 2005 · Chapter 3: III

Gandalf doesn't seem to quite have this courting thing down. Or maybe he's not even doing that. Maybe he doesn't yet know himself what he feels.

Nilmandra · 23 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

I am enjoying this look at Olorin..and I like that he is telling his story to Elrond, in particular. You also have a nice feel for the Valar.

Leaward · 23 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

I love the idea of Olorin being to peek inside the elven world without them knowing. We know Tolkien said he did it but to see what he was actually thinking is intriguing. The whole concept of birth and death must have been so hard for a maia to grasp; I can see how it would perplex him. I like the scene where he stands 'thinking' and years have past without him even being aware of it. Of course time would mean nothing to them! A lot of thought has been put into it, and kept it so canon, and I love to see that type of story. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

The Karenator · 23 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

What a unique and wonderful look behind the 'curtain' in Valinor. I like the way you've depicted the Valar and the Maia. You've given them wisdom and innocence. And distinct personalities. I also really like your introduction into the story of Olorin's life in Valinor with Elrond and Gandalf. I'm looking forward to reading more of this tale. Very interesting and well done. Karen

meckinock · 22 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

This story is so wonderfully fresh and unique. I am so enjoying this look into Gandalf's private life. Your depiction of his natural state makes me smile - it's really intriguing to imagine him flitting among the flowers, raising barely a breeze! Varda's appearance was quite powerful, and Gandalf's confusion at his feelings is so sweet. You've woven so many of Tolkien's themes into this story, and I'm anxious to see where it goes next. Thanks for posting here!

meckinock · 22 February 2005 · Chapter 0: Prologue and I

Wow, I love Gandalf and Elrond in the same story. And it's a brave author who delves into the mind of Gandalf! What a fascinating exploration of what makes him so unique and special. I love his insatiable curiosity about the Quendi, and the glimpses of his life in Valinor are delightful.

daw the minstrel · 22 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

I am absolutely certain I've never read a Gandalf romance before, so this is interesting. And it does seem plausible. After all there was Thingol and Miriel. Feanor must have been an interesting phenomenon to the elves and maia. A child! Born not made! How odd!

elliska · 22 February 2005 · Chapter 2: II

I have to say I like poor Gandalf's utter inability to define what draws him to Irimien and Varda's immediate understanding of it. That was very sweet. And I like the way you are weaving canon facts (Finwe's interest in Indis; Feanor's courting) into the story as well as the Valar and Maiar's warnings to Gandalf that he has duties too. I like the way you are characterizing 'young' Gandalf here. Very much like he was with the Hobbits in M-E. Great job.

elliska · 22 February 2005 · Chapter 0: Prologue and I

Well I have to say I was really skeptical of the "Love for Gandalf" challenge at OSA but you have made a wonderful start with this. I love the beginning with poor Elrond feeling Celebrian's presence/absence so strongly. You really portrayed that well. I like how you used that to set up Gandalf's memories. I like your Elrond. And Gandalf surrounded by the wine glasses was pretty funny. :) But the part I liked best was the conversation between Gandalf and Nienna (great choice, by the way. Such an interesting character). Loved this: "All life requires sacrifice," replied Nienna. "All creation requires some measure of hardship. For one song to be heard, others must fall silent, lest there be discord. Every craftsman must, in some small way, be diminished as he fashions his creations. So it is with life. And the scenes with Finwe and Feanor were very well done. Certainly a good choice of characters to illustrate what Gandalf is trying to understand. I definitely like your beginning. Off to the next chapter. :)