Antane
· 26 February 2006
· Chapter 1: The Corruption of Desire
It is not so easy to give up part of your soul.
Wow! Very good!
Namarie, God bless, Antane :)
Author's reply
Thanks for reviewing, Antane. :) I can't imagine the struggle that Frodo went through during his entire journey and then again at that final moment. There is just no way to triumph over something as evil as the Ring. No one's will is strong enough for that and I hope I made that clear with the last line of the drabble.
Thanks again for the review!
cher
· 6 February 2005
· Chapter 1: The Corruption of Desire
Gulp!! That is very well done. Poor Frodo!
Author's reply
Thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed this. I feel so sorry for Frodo...Sauron is so stupid for ruining this innocent hobbit's life. *hugs Frodo tightly then lets go when she squeezes him too hard* Wow, I'm mental. Thanks for reviewing! :)
Lindelea
· 5 February 2005
· Chapter 2: Not Built For War
Nice turn of phrase: the strange beauty of a thing built for war
It is amazing how much can be said in 100 words.
Author's reply
I thought it's so ironic how armor and weapons and such can all be so beautifully crafted, yet they are indeed things made to kill others. I tried to capture the irony in this piece.
Drabbles are really amazing...you don't need a long story to capture the heart and soul of a certain scene. I've tried to get it so my drabbles are exactly 100 words, but that never works. I always go over--there is still so much to say, sometimes. And I should stop leaving replies so long. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!
Lindelea
· 5 February 2005
· Chapter 1: The Corruption of Desire
So clear who is speaking, and who has just spoken. Sad and chilling at one.
Author's reply
Thank you so much for your review! It's hard to imagine what Frodo's going through if you don't understand what's happening to him. Sam doesn't understand the corruption of the desire of the Ring. It's destroying Frodo! *cries* Okay, I'm done. Thanks for reading! :)