Reviews (14)

F48seJ17f · 20 January 2016 · Chapter 4: Foreshadows

This is a really innetligelt way to answer the question.

Dís Thráinsdotter · 30 June 2009 · Chapter 8: A Princely Gift

The new apprentices are getting their places, and Delbaeth goes to her new family. I can imagine that Angharad feels overwhelmed by the princely gift she receives but I agree with Lord Orchald, it is well given. I like this story and always wonder what will happen next. Am so looking forward to the next chapter.

ecrm · 23 November 2008 · Chapter 1: Homecoming

I really like reading your stories about Halabor; it's always interesting when someone writes about whats going on in rural areas away from the court. I agree with you about the Dunedain not making up a majority of the population of Gondor, although they would probably make up a majority in the cities especially Minas Tirith and Pelargir. My thinking is that many natives of what would become Gondor gradually adopted Numenorean culture over the centuries, a process that no doubt accelerated with the foundation of the Kingdom. A good example in the real world would be the Slav invaders of Greece from the late sixth century AD onwards. The original Greeks retreated into the mountains or fortified cities and after a time the Slavic culture essentially became Greek. Like in Greece the natives would have had an incentive to adopt Dunedain ways and customs, not least because of the power of the King. Maybe I should write an essay about this when I have the time. Anyway, love your writing.

Denise · 21 November 2008 · Chapter 7: A Raid With Consequences

Well, I was starting to read "An Autumn Fair in Halabor" when it occurred to me that I had a guilt-free reason to come back first to this story and savor it all over again! I've really enjoyed getting reacquainted with your incredible cast of characters. So rich and complex and REAL, in a town of the same. I've said it before, but it's a little akin to reading the very best medieval history text, but far more entertaining. Still love this quote: "We might walk straight into darkness, and that soon, but at least we do not despair." That's the brave and forthright of Gondor, right there. Again, a great story with great writing. Thanks so much for sharing! And, you know, when you get time... another chapter??? *hopeful look*

Linda Hoyland · 8 June 2007 · Chapter 6: An Eye for an Eye

A vivid portrayal of everyday life in Gondor.I like the way justice and mercy is combined here.

Bodkin · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 4: Foreshadows

Poor Mistress Eryn! It doesn't sound as if she had much of a life of her own, but the attitude of those merchants! As for the extra work for Odhrain - well, it sounds as if it couldn't happen to a nicer guy. Conceited and prejudiced - so many good qualities! And he seems so overworked at the moment - standing there and intimidating everyone. The extra responsibilities will get him out of their hair, anyway.

Bodkin · 12 June 2006 · Chapter 3: The Masterpiece

I do love the complexity of this society - and it is enjoyable to see the inhabitants of the town with a little more time. Poor Henderch, though, knows this can only be the calm before the storm - and that the time they have is borrowed.

Imrahoil · 7 April 2006 · Chapter 2: Old Craban

Aber da bin ich nicht reingekommen, hat einfach nicht geklappt, also mußte ich geduldig (HA!) bis jetzt warten beziehungsweise bis Ostern, denn dann hab ich endlich richtig Zeit, schubiduh. Gruß Imrahoil

Haleth · 5 April 2006 · Chapter 2: Old Craban

Henderch and Dorlas certainly have a pragmatic approach to romance. It's probably more in keeping with life during a time of war than 'high romance' where people admire the object of their affections but stay at a distance. They might convince themselves that people don't talk, but in a small town, people would know, or at least suspect, and they would talk. They'd probably be polite enough to not say anything directly to either Hendrech or Dorlas, though. Especially not to Dorlas who could take revenge in a nasty but mostly harmless way. It will be interesting to see where this will go.

Haleth · 5 April 2006 · Chapter 1: Homecoming

I just found this story and enjoyed the first chapter very much. The explanation of the town's history really caught my attention. It makes the town itself a character in the story, not just the generic setting in which the action takes place. The original characters also have their own stories which gives the tale depth and their are plenty of details, like the young lord's taste for silly hats, that make them come alive.

Imrahoil · 3 April 2006 · Chapter 2: Old Craban

Na endlich, meine Güte, hast Du uns darauf warten lassen, freu mich schon auf eine freie Minute, um in Ruhe zu lesen. Gruß Imrahoil

Lasse-Lanta · 30 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Homecoming

The idea of using original characters and weaving them around canon situations has always been intriguing to me; and one I whole-heartedly support. In many ways I find it an even greater compliment to Tolkien than to just place his characters in new situations. If anyone can do this, it would be you, Soledad. Your detail of place and personality with original characters always sets your work well above the usual and expected. Being given the gift of beta-reader simply enhances the experience for me. My only suggestion at this point is to perhaps not warn people that there are mainly original characters, nor would I say that there is no suspense left for those who have read you other work. Rather, I would call it an enhancement or back story to something else you've written, as I did with my "Adventurers". This might lead new readers to other works and more enjoyment :-). My second suggestion; and it's so very selfish *g*; is to please don't make us wait too long for that second chapter. Lasse-Lanta

daw the minstrel · 30 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Homecoming

I will confess I had a little trouble getting into this, Soledad, because the first few screens seemed pretty heavy with exposition. But once the characters came on stage and started talking and interacting, I was engaged. Herumor is an appealing young man, and Henderch is interesting. I can see potential for all kinds of stories here.

Karri · 29 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Homecoming

This is excellent so far. :-) The setting and the characters are extremely well developed. I think it has the making of a fine novel.