The Field of Cormallen by Morwen Tindomerel
Elentarri · 25 March 2015 · Chapter 6: The Burglar's Jewel - And A Clue
Hello. I've been re-reading some of your stories and well...... please, please, please finish (or update) them if you possibly can? Pretty please? They are too good to just let hang like this.
Rick · 3 May 2011 · Chapter 6: The Burglar's Jewel - And A Clue
This is wonderful - please do keep on & finish! I'd really like to see you finish all your stories on this site, they are all very interesting and fun to read. I like your different take on the hiding of the Rangers of the North. You stay very consistent and plausible. Thanks for writing.
BKB · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 6: The Burglar's Jewel - And A Clue
I'm delighted to see that you are back! You're series of interlinked stories are among my favorites. Thank you.
BKB · 25 April 2006 · Chapter 6: The Burglar's Jewel - And A Clue
Larner · 2 April 2006 · Chapter 6: The Burglar's Jewel - And A Clue
And so several debts begin to be paid, and Frodo suspects he now knows a secret. Bilbo educated him well.
Larner · 2 April 2006 · Chapter 5: There's No Going Back
I strongly believe Boromir does indeed rejoice at these and what they have done not only for his land, people, and city, but for all of Middle Earth. And I see my own suspicions are right. Poor Noldor!
Larner · 2 April 2006 · Chapter 4: Scars Old and New
I have my own suspicions, of course. Definitely an AU story here, I see, as Dain died and was succeeded by Thorin Ironhelm (IIRC, of course). I like your view of the Wainriders; I pictured them a bit differently, of course; but yours are very interesting. Mine came out as proto-Mongols, who lived in yurts built on wagons and often took their women and children with them along with their homes as they went on campaigns.
Author's reply
It's AU but not in that direction. Gimli has had no news from home and doesn't know of Dain's death when he speaks to Aragorn. However I see I do have a reference to Dain after Gimli returns from the Mountain and have corrected it. Thanks for pointing it out :D
Larner · 2 April 2006 · Chapter 2: Sweet Dreams
Yes, I, too, believe that life will return--the proper life for that land. And it will know beauty of its own sort.
grumpy · 30 January 2005 · Chapter 3: The King's Work
great chapter, wonder what Frodo is holding back. Still trying to figure out who Tal-argon is, but since my books are packed away I will just keep looking forward to future chapters.
shirebound · 27 January 2005 · Chapter 3: The King's Work
This continues to be fascinating! Your details and amazing characters (old and new!) bring this to vivid life. I especially like this perception: "Frodo is holding something back, something he is ashamed of.” The King shook his head. “Whatever it is, it can be of no moment compared to what he has done.” “It is of great moment to Frodo.“ Tal-argan said sharply. “Aragorn, you do not heal a wounded spirit by telling him he is troubling himself over nothing! Whatever it is it is not ‘nothing‘ in Frodo‘s eyes.”
Bodkin · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 2: Sweet Dreams
This is a fascinating story - I look forward to finding out more about Tal-Argan's experiences, as well as how he intends to help Frodo.
shirebound · 24 December 2004 · Chapter 2: Sweet Dreams
This is a beautiful story, full of hope and healing. A marvelous blend of book, movie, and your own imagination. "I believe that life is stronger than unlife. The power of Yavanna works slowly but it is very great, in the end she will prevail.” Lovely.
Larner · 11 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Nightmares
Very beautifully written.
Lavender Took · 11 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Nightmares
A good start - keep writing!!
Starfire_Moonlight · 11 December 2004 · Chapter 1: Nightmares
This story is getting good, wrte more please! :)