At the End of His Rope by Lindelea

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Krackenmire · 28 February 2025 · Chapter 69: Remembering Day

Actually, can you also do a Remembering Day in Gondor and Rohan? And one of the first time that this tradition began?

Author's reply

Hello! Sorry for this belated reply. I originally imagined Remembering Day as a Shire custom, so it probably would not be observed in Gondor and Rohan. I'm not sure when hobbits began the custom, though logically, it seems reasonable that the Stoors would have been the first, and perhaps the Fallohides picked it up from them, possibly around T.A. 1630 (when the Tale of Years says the Stoors came up from Dunland and joined the hobbits who had migrated from Bree to found the Shire). If the thought solidifies into a scene, it'll probably appear (eventually) in the "Marcho and Blanco" story that is sitting on the shelf, waiting to be finished. (Think good thoughts. So many stories waiting to be finished or told...)

Mirkwoodmaiden · 16 April 2020 · Chapter 6: Farmhouse Hospitality

Lindelea! So glad they found safety at last. There is a wonderful warm glow about this chapter. I see Diamond knows what she is about! Brandy is a fine thing! Warm milk, honey, a dash of nutmeg and some brandy! Sounds wonderful! Stay safe! Keep well. ((virutal hugs)) MM

Author's reply

Mmm, I am tempted... warm milk, honey, a dash of nutmeg and some brandy. (I even have milk on hand at the moment that is safe for me to drink - "A2", they call it. I really hope it catches on (the store does not always have it in stock), and that they begin to make butter and cheese as well. (So far, I have found milk, cream, half and half, and – on rare occasions – yogurt.) Diamond takes very good care of her Pippin. :) Stay safe! ((hugs))

Mirkwoodmaiden · 4 April 2020 · Chapter 5: More Guests Arrive at the Party

Lindelea! Lovely interactions! And why do I get the impression that Farry is one of those children who are embarrassed by their parents when they "don't act like parents" i.e. Diamond and Pippin giggling in this chapter! Hope you and yours are well! MM

Author's reply

It is certainly a mercy he didn’t take after them (at least in this instance) and take to drink! Thanks so much. I’m glad you’re enjoying the story. Stay well. (hug)

Mirkwoodmaiden · 31 March 2020 · Chapter 4: Campfire Tales

Lindelea! LOL!! Faramir is quite the storyteller apparently! Onto the next chapter! MM

Author's reply

I do believe JRRT was descended from hobbits, and got some of his storytelling genius from them. Thanks for stopping to leave a good word!

Mirkwoodmaiden · 28 March 2020 · Chapter 3: Getting Acquainted

Lindelea! This was absoultely lovely! The fond interaction between Diamond and Pippin is wonderful. OK now I'm going to have to read "Jewels" MM

Author's reply

LOL, "Jewels" was a gateway drug of sorts. It drug me into writing more and more about 4th Age hobbits, anyhow. (Just a hint, Jewels is half complete here at SoA as I was trying to rewrite it to make Estella the right age and hit a brick wall around that time. I will have to add the rest of the chapters unedited, I guess. I will add that to my list.) Thanks so much! Diamond is certainly a match for Pippin. Hope this finds you well.

demeter d · 28 March 2020 · Chapter 75: A Debt to Be Paid

Bergil had his own debt to Pippin. Pippin's actions at the Hallows, along with Bergil's father Beregond's, saved the life of Faramir. Then instead of being killed for shedding blood in the Hallows, Bereond was given a new life in service to Faramir. Bergil owes the way his own life became a good deal to Pippin's part in that whole thing. I am sure he considers that he will always be in Pippin's debt!

Author's reply

You're right about that! I hadn't thought of it in quite that way, maybe because Pippin always had lingering doubt (if he hadn't stopped to talk to Beregond, then Beregond wouldn't have left his post... he has told someone at least once that maybe he could have found Gandalf and got back to the Houses of the Dead in time to save Faramir without endangering Beregond). I wonder if Bergil will someday be the one to convince Pippin that he is not guilty in Beregond's trial and "exile". For certainly Bergil looks up to Pippin. In a manner of speaking. Thanks. Hope this finds you well. (hug)

Mirkwoodmaiden · 28 March 2020 · Chapter 2: Special Delivery

Lindelea! I do love your characterizations, even early on they do jump of the screen full of life! >'I am pushing,' Diamond shouted. 'If you think you can do better you're welcome >to try!' LOL. So true to life. >Her son smiled down at her and said, 'Don't worry, Mother, I'm just going to >pretend you're a pony for the time being.' Faramir is truly a grown-up lad. I shall settle in for the long haul on this story! Hope this review finds you well. Stay safe. MM

Author's reply

I'm so glad the story has caught your imagination! It is probably similar to my going out of my comfort zone (hobbits) and reading about other folks in M-e... for example, you have helped me fall in love with Faramir and Eowyn and Eomer and want to see more of them, and I am finding myself intrigued with Imrahil, Thranduil and Legolas, and with the life of the Dunadain, and Beorn, from other authors, just for starters. Yes, stay safe seems a good greeting in these days. So, same back at you.

Mirkwoodmaiden · 28 March 2020 · Chapter 1: The Problem

Lindelea! I love Diamond! She has got spirit! How does Pippin get into these scrapes? LOL! MM

Author's reply

So glad you like her! It always seemed logical to me that the Travellers, being the extraordinary hobbits that they are, would marry wives with spirit and courage and common sense. Rosie Cotton certainly set the tone, even with the small glimpse that JRRT gave of her. (I have to admit that Pippin has got into a lot of scrapes in my stories because the Muse has a taste for angst and h/c. It got so bad that I had to lay off him and pick on Ferdi instead for a while, until one of my readers threatened to start a Ferdi Protection Society... LOL) Good to hear from you! Stay well.

demeter d · 27 March 2020 · Chapter 63: All the King's Horses and All the King's Men

I am writing this review in the Year of Our Lord 2020, in the Seventh Age of MODERN EARTH.I came here to reread this tale after reading your reply to Mirkwood Maiden's review of recently posted Chapter 20 of your tale, "The Thrum of Tookish Bowstrings. You mentioned this, so I came hear to revisit. I do not think I reviewed any of this back when it was new. That was when I had first discovered this site, and was still trying not to spend all of my time in Middle Earth. A lost cause, I'm afraid! I just had to muse on life imitating art. Modern Earth is in the midst of a new pestilence called "coronavirus 19". My small city in the Rocky Mountains has not any cases - YET - but a smaller college town just an hour North of here has already two, I think! Right now Idaho has just been put in three week quarantine. I am sure that the embattled medical personnel in places like New York City, Seattle, and other nations around the world would welcome a visit from the King with the healing hands. Prayers to all of you reading this now. And I hope those reading this in years to come may be able to reflect that the plaque reached it's peak and subsided about this time. We can only pray that may be so!

Author's reply

I am so glad to hear from you. Amazing how isolating isolation has been... or maybe not surprising. D'y'know, I was re-reading in this story as a part of preparation for writing new stuff (and making sure I don't put my foot in it where stories cross over), and was struck by the real life vs fiction thing. Ironically enough, I can still remember how, at the time I wrote this, I was saying to myself, "Nobody will ever believe that a fever can be so widespread, so debilitating, so deadly..." and hoping they could suspend their disbelief enough to enjoy the story. It is so heartening to hear your thoughts on this. I mean, I write the stories that I would like to be reading myself (and does it sound too egotistical to say that sometimes I go back and read my old stories simply for comfort's sake? Although, I am re-reading Runaway at present, for "research" purposes, and so I'm not exactly indulging in "smelling my own farts" as a family member would put it, for I recognize the passages that Jodancingtree wrote (and whole chapters, in parts), so I'm enjoying revisiting her efforts as well. And now I'm hoping she's well, for we haven't connected in such a long time...). Yet whenever I read a review, I feel a spark of energy and a smile and I don't feel so much like I'm just talking to myself. Silly me. We are sort of on the edge of the cauldron where we live, or maybe between a rock and a hard place, between one of the hard-hit cities and another city where cases doubled one day and then doubled again the next day despite the restrictions the governor announced (so double-double? Scary to think of that kind of progresion. And also a tinge of closing the stable door after the ponies have already run off), and more deaths begin reported. I'm praying for our medical personnel, and the people in government who are having to find the safest path through the quagmire, and the rest of us... Blessings to you, and hope this finds you well.

Eirinn Leigh · 13 November 2015 · Chapter 999999: Note to readers: 8/15/03

Simply wonderful writing, though a bit overfilled with shadow.

Author's reply

Belated thanks for stopping and taking time to leave your impressions!

Dreamflower · 8 August 2008 · Chapter 96: Epilogue

It holds up very well to a third re-reading as well. I started looking at it last night, when I wanted to rec it at lotr_fic_recs (they are doing Pippin fics for the next couple of weeks) and I just couldn't stop. I love Pippin in this--even though it's one of your earlier stories, his characterization is so sound and solid. And I love the way that the absent Frodo is so very *present* in it, as well. Just saying, you know.

Author's reply

Aw, lovely! Thanks so much for the note of encouragement, and the rec! (Such an honour!) Somehow Pippin sprang forth, fully formed, and so did Ferdi, in this. I'm not sure just where they'd been (though there was a foundation for Pippin's character in the Young Steward tales, Jewels among them), but the two of them continued pretty much as they started here, and Regi too, if I remember right. Isn't it interesting how the subconscious works? Ah, yes, hard to leave Frodo out... I'm sure he "stayed" in the Shire in a sense, in the memories of those who loved him. It was fun, too, to wonder if Merry's dream was perhaps not just a dream, but two dreaming together and meeting in some otherness. Funny, that this story started as a one-chapter joke, and then expanded to no more than five chapters, and then kept growing and growing like a weed gone mad. I'm glad it found its way to a satisfying ending, even if it did take a long and sometimes meandering path to get there. Thanks again.

Tari · 11 July 2007 · Chapter 96: Epilogue

I can't believe I've finished reading. What a truly awesom tale. I'm going to read A Healer's Tale next. The way I'm going, I might not read anything else for a very long time. Your stories are too wonderful to miss. Is there a story about Jack and Wil after they recovered from their injuries? Tari

Author's reply

Ah, bless you for your encouragement. It makes the Muse smile, and helps the new writing flow a little easier. (Don't know how I managed to write a chapter or three a day for so long... I'm lucky to have one new chapter a week, these days. All the rest being posted are beta-edited chapters.) Well, a sort of sequel to Just Desserts would be found in Dreamflower's Bunny. Jack and his "boys" make their appearance in the parts of the story that act as frames for the main tale. It takes place not long after Just Desserts ends. And I certainly hope you enjoy Healer's Tale. It was one that I very much enjoyed writing, and was sorry to end. Thanks much for your taking the time to share your thoughts.

Tari · 11 July 2007 · Chapter 90: Remembering Love

"'You don't have to do what he did,' Sam said. 'We've each been given our own row to hoe, you know. If we start looking at the weeds in the other fellow's row, we're likely to miss our own weeds, or start chopping out the good plants.' He looked at the other in silence, then added, 'I'd say you've been doing a fair job with the row you've been given." A take off on Gandalf. I love it. Sam definitely is wise. Now, one to more of this wonderful tale. Tari

Author's reply

I hadn't thought of it being Gandalf-y, but you're right. Thanks!

Tari · 10 July 2007 · Chapter 87: Payment in Full

I had tears in my eyes along with Sam. What a touching chapter. Maybe now the Hobbits will simply say Thank You. The debt owed them can never be fully paid if only they could understand. Tari

Author's reply

Yes, and I must give much credit to Jodancingtree, who helped me with this chapter. I think that perhaps the hobbits are beginning to understand. Thanks!

Tari · 3 July 2007 · Chapter 69: Remembering Day

What a beautiful ceremony shared by all. I love the Hobbits almost as much as the Elves. They're adorable. Glad to see food is close at hand. To many have died already. Tari

Author's reply

Thank you! The food arrived at a good time, in good time.

Tari · 27 June 2007 · Chapter 34: Farewell to Gondor

As I continued to read this delightful tale, I came to the part where Sam requested from Strider bottles with tight stoppers. Will he fill them with the magical Ent water from Fanghorn? That might be just the ticket to heal Pippin. Guess I'll have to continue reading to find out.

Author's reply

Well, thank you! Methinks that yon Tari is a very astute reader.

Tari · 26 June 2007 · Chapter 13: Naming Day

The blessing given with the gifts was so special. Pippin's blessing was the final touch. Loved it.

Author's reply

Thanks!

Imhiriel · 12 December 2006 · Chapter 93: Another Naming Day

I don't think I told you this until now, but I find your Naming Day customs simply wonderful, charming, funny, and very touching!

Author's reply

Belated thanks! I tried to make them as hobbity as I could imagine.

Imhiriel · 12 December 2006 · Chapter 90: Remembering Love

What a wonderful chapter! Very insightful and moving. I, too, know the grief and guilt, even, of losing (or fearing to lose) the memories of loved ones that are gone. The anguish of not remembering their voices any longer, the faces that seem to blur and become indistinct in memory. And how helpful and reassuring it is to talk with others about that person, how the memories can become clearer once again.

Author's reply

Again, thanks for your feedback. It is good to talk with others, to look through old pictures, to exchange stories and to sing songs. We still do that on occasion in my family, remembering our parents and our brother who have gone before.

Imhiriel · 12 December 2006 · Chapter 87: Payment in Full

I did the same as Sam when reading the "bill".

Author's reply

Yes, I'd hoped that would be the result. I think it a fitting tribute to Frodo, and how difficult it must have been to the Men of Rohan and Gondor that he wouldn't take any kind of reward for what he did.

Imhiriel · 12 December 2006 · Chapter 14: Tremors

Do you really think the Tooks, or Pippin in particular, would control and/or censor letters? I have to admit, even the suggestion shocked me.

Author's reply

I don't know that it would be a common practice, but considering how the Tooks isolated themselves in the time of the ruffians, I thought it might be a possibility. Not really censoring, so much as keeping an eye on what news leaked out what with the gossipy nature of hobbits. The last thing Pippin wanted was for Merry to come charging in to rescue him, compromising his position even more than it already was. I think he might have kept a discreet eye on Meliloc's communications, might even have talked to Meliloc about not alarming Merry. I thought I'd answered this review before now, for I think I remember reading it in my email, but I don't see a reply posted. Thanks so much for your feedback.

Endaewen · 16 October 2006 · Chapter 93: Another Naming Day

A truly lovely custom.

Author's reply

Belated thank you!

Endaewen · 15 October 2006 · Chapter 43: A Trail to Lake Evendim

I'm sure I've reviewed this chapter before, but it always brings a smile to my face.

Nienor Niniel · 25 September 2006 · Chapter 96: Epilogue

You want to make me cry, don't you? But I forgive you... just barely! Honestly, I suppose I should start listing all things about this that I enjoyed, but it would be a very long list. Of course, Pippin's healing! He really waited long enough. Then I loved all the interaction of Hobbits with people from outside the Shire. Bergil, of course. And Sam getting the recognition that comes to him and the Shire people learning more about what happened. What else can I say? Thanks a lot! Nienor

Author's reply

Nienor, somehow I missed this review! Don't want to appear ungrateful. I appreciate your hitting the high points, and you are most welcome.

cookiefleck · 2 September 2006 · Chapter 96: Epilogue

Came here on your rec and loved it. Second only to Sam h/c I love scenes in which he is honored and recognized for his deeds and selflessness. The entire story pulled me in and I felt as though I was among all of the folk as I read. You wrapped it all up quite satisfactorily. Very moving in many parts. Thank you!

Author's reply

Thank you for your review. I'm sorry that I am so late in answering. I don't remember seeing this before. Appreciate your taking time to leave a good word.