Leaward
· 31 October 2004
· Chapter 2
I really enjoyed this story the way it is told from both viewpoints so you get a real insight into each character. Hot and tender all at the same time. Do you plan to do more ... I cringed when I saw he was with Theodred at the fords ... that doesn't bode well.
Author's reply
Thank you Leaward, well there MAY be a sequel...all I can say is watch this space, you never know. Eokat and Drake.
Jay of Lasgalen
· 29 October 2004
· Chapter 2
Well done, Eokat and Drake! You have created two wonderfully detailed characters here. The idea of two contrasting chapters from each POV was clever, and there was no feeling of repetition as there often is with such scenes.
I particularly liked the womens' chat about their menfolk while they prepared their feast!
Jay
Author's reply
Jay, many thanks and we are glad that you enjoyed our story. I know we both enjoyed writing it. Eokat and Drake.