good_one_pip · 23 October 2004 · Chapter 1: When The Evening Comes
Very good story, Pearl. It's amazing how much our hobbits have grown up. Very thought-provoking, too.
When The Evening Comes by Pearl Took
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Connie B. · 22 October 2004 · Chapter 1: When The Evening Comes
Wow! What a fantastic story. You captured a part of Merry and Pippin's changed personalities that few others have. It is sad to think that they were changed so much by the war, but no one can go through something like that and remain innocent. The fact that they restrained their anger at the ruffians shows that their enate hobbit goodness was still in tact. Their going ronund to every town to help will be a healing for both themselves and their beloved Shire. Hope what I'm saying makes sense. I'm stil awed by this one. Great job. Connie B.