Mariposa · 7 October 2004 · Chapter 1: Twilight
This is excellent--I especially liked Pippin, and that awful moment between laughter and tears. Beautiful.
As Day Ends by liptonrm
Mariposa · 7 October 2004 · Chapter 1: Twilight
This is excellent--I especially liked Pippin, and that awful moment between laughter and tears. Beautiful.
Hai Took · 6 October 2004 · Chapter 1: Twilight
That was very well done! I like the way you gave each hobbit a reason to continue and their resolve to go with their friends and continue no matter what was great! I especially liked Merry's it was nice to see what Merry must have felt there in Bree! Thank you for sharing!