Envinyatar · 5 May 2004 · Chapter 1: woven in a braid
I thought I had reviewed this before, but clearly not here. Very moving and evocative. There is a very gentle quality to this, achieved I think by the economy of the style. I wanted to say simplicity, but I thought it might sound rude - I know how difficult it is to use only the words necessary to convey the image! I hope the poem can be completed one day.