Elven Queen of Gondor
· 4 November 2004
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
I do like to follow your story, though I sometimes think it's a bit short in describing the scenery. I think you could take more time, let the scene and its characters develop a little further. Up to now only little is known about the slavers, for example.
Author's reply
Ahh, thank you for the review :) Please do keep in mind that each chapter was written by a different author and we can't go into too much details so as to leave some space for immaginations :) And some authors are amateurs writing for the first time so please be lenient on us :D I hope you'll continue reading. :)
Nikara
· 2 November 2004
· Chapter 10: Chapter 10
Yes, it would be a good time for them to show up-hint, hint... That was a really short chapter. Please add more soon!
Author's reply
Let's see if the twins will be able to free them. :) More to come tomorrow :)
Galimeril
· 2 November 2004
· Chapter 10: Chapter 10
AWWWWWW! Come of, that's not nearly long enough!!!
Author's reply
Sorry about the short chapter :) I'll post Chapter 11 tomorrow. How's that? :)
Nikara
· 20 October 2004
· Chapter 9: Chapter 9
That is a horrible place to leave off! Please add some more soon!
Author's reply
Next update on Nov 1 :D
Timmy2222
· 20 October 2004
· Chapter 9: Chapter 9
Ai, poor Aragorn again... Hell, will he ever get out of trouble again? LOL!
Laughed heartily about the first sentence; this was just too good to be true.
It's a pity it's such a short chapter and you'll be away for a long time. But I got you on chapter alert, so I won't miss your update.
Cheers,
- T.
Author's reply
Guess not. That man is born for trouble. LOL! I will update as soon as I get back :)
Nikara
· 12 October 2004
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh dear. Now those two are going to get themselves in trouble. Why am I not surprised. More soon please!
Author's reply
Oh you are probably correct. When are those two ever not in trouble? *eg* But what kind of trouble? That's for us to know and for you to find out. LOL!!
nessa
· 12 October 2004
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
plase do keep going with this story
Author's reply
With every intention :D
Timmy2222
· 12 October 2004
· Chapter 8: Chapter 8
OK, finding Aragorn and Legolas will not be it, right? I wonder what the twins will face once they get closer. You keep the tension rising...
- T.
Author's reply
Hehehe. Well, somehow I don't think the twins will be able to free them all by themselves. Hmm... *g*
Timmy2222
· 5 October 2004
· Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Nice fight description. It's a pity Aragorn miscalculated his attempt to free Legolas. Now I fear he will pay for it - not only with a dislocated shoulder.
I favour the sentence: 'Legolas' hope and Aragorn's consciousness departed in the same instant.' Just great!
- T.
Author's reply
Believe me when I say a dislocated shoulder is just icing on the cake. *eg*
elf-girl
· 28 September 2004
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Please write more!!!
Author's reply
Your wish is my command :)
Eruanna
· 27 September 2004
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Poor Aragorn. Poor, helpless Aragorn. Authors are so mean to him. We know he hates being helpless, so we do it to him on purpose. :P
But you have me in a lot of suspence, so please hurry with the next chapter!
Author's reply
Yesss... we are eviiiiil >:) We have been very mean to them all. Very, very mean *eg*
Timmy2222
· 27 September 2004
· Chapter 6: Chapter 6
Ai, poor elf again... Doesn't look he will make it out of captivity alone. Doesn't look either that Aragorn will be much of a help alone. So what to do? Shall Aragorn turn back and get the twins to help him? Or shall he proceed and hope to get a better chance later? Well, a nice cliffhanger! I look forward to read more.
- T.
Author's reply
It will be wise for Aragorn to turn back and get help. But by doing that he may lose track of the slavers. If he continues to follow them, will he be able to free Legolas by himself? Well... you'll find out later ;)
Anonymous
· 23 September 2004
· Chapter 5: Chapter 5
Please dont let Aragorn get caught too-please please please!
Author's reply
Hmm... let me think about it... Hee hee hee. Well... can't let Legolas have all the fun himself right? They are good friends so must share everything. *eg*
Anonymous
· 21 September 2004
· Chapter 4: Chapter 4
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Author's reply
Hohohohohooo... Merry Christmas! :D
Nikara
· 16 September 2004
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
That is not a good sign. More soon please!
Author's reply
Nope, nothing is a good sign in this story. LOL! Well... not until the very end... So keep reading :D
Anonymous
· 16 September 2004
· Chapter 3: Chapter 3
no, no, no! Don't stop!
Author's reply
And it keeps going and going and going and going... LOL!!
Timmy2222
· 14 September 2004
· Chapter 2: Chapter 2
What a promising start! I hope you will update soon and let us know what trouble is ahead of Legolas and Aragorn. Is there a way that they *might* stay out of mischief this time? -- OK, just kidding.
- T.
Author's reply
Well, lets just say that they got others into their mischief this time :P
OakWolf
· 13 September 2004
· Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Beautifully written and anexcellent cliffie-how could a chapter get any better?More please!
Author's reply
On behalf of the author, I thank you :D
The cliffies won't get any better. They will get worse. LOL!!
Eruanna
· 10 September 2004
· Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Ooooh....nice beginning. :) More please!
Author's reply
More next week :)
legolasgreenleafgilestel (on ff.net)
· 9 September 2004
· Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oooh...
What happens next?
How often will you be updating this story? I am finding it interesting, silly estel, hurting his leg, its so like him.
Author's reply
It'll most probably be posted once or twice a week. :) Estel is so clumsy. Hehehe.
Galimeril
· 8 September 2004
· Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, a wonderful start! I really like the descriptions, very vivid! I can't wait to see what happens next and I would like an explaination as to how you did all that to Legolas! Humph! Treat him gently. Great start, I know the rest of the story will be beyond my wildest dreams! Update soon please!
Galimeril ;D
Author's reply
Thank you! Thank you! :) An explanation of how Legolas got into this mess will be given in later chapters so keep reading :D