The Deep Breath Before the Plunge by Iorhael
Claudia · 4 September 2004 · Chapter 1: The Deep Breath
Wow, I liked this a lot. Very angsty. The dream was so vivid, and what a disappointment to wake up and find himself in Minas Tirith just before the siege! Nice job!
Author's reply
Thanks, Claudia. I'm so happy you like it. I'm really happy!
Lily the Hobbit · 30 August 2004 · Chapter 1: The Deep Breath
Poor Pippin! *hugs the little one* A lovely fiction! You should try and write Pippin more often :) ~*~ “Pippin, it’s Rae’s birthday today, don’t you remember? She wants to give you something.” First thing in the morning? ~*~ Reminded me very much of the scene in the book after they had met Gildor and Frodo is having his breakfast and tells Pip to be silent because he had to think - something Pippin could not understand. :)
Author's reply
Ha! Are you a Pippin-lover? You remember details of the story where he was in. :) Well, maybe I'll try again some time. Thanks, Lily!
Grey Wonderer · 30 August 2004 · Chapter 1: The Deep Breath
Enjoyed your Gandalf. Cute story!
Author's reply
Oh, GW, thanks for coming again and commenting!