TithenFeredir · 31 January 2005 · Chapter 1: The Breaking of the World
That was lovely, so bittersweet. The first person POV makes it somehow more poignant. I'm going to look for your other stories. TF
The Breaking of the World by Coreinha
Reviews (4)
Galimeril · 30 August 2004 · Chapter 1: The Breaking of the World
The ending of this brought tears to my eyes. It was a beautifuly written piece! Don't hesitate to write more! Galimeril ;D
Author's reply
Aw, thank you! If you're interested in more of my writing, I have seven or eight other ficcies up on this site! Look for my username - Coreinha.
calenore · 30 August 2004 · Chapter 1: The Breaking of the World
Wow, this was well written. I liked the emotion you put into it, the different perspective on what might have happened after Legolas and Gimli sailed. When I finished reading it, I wasn't sure whether I felt depressed or glad. I think that's a good sign for your writing, though. It can be read on more than one level. Nice work!
Author's reply
Thank you very much! In all honesty, this little ficlet fell out of my head in a single afternoon. It just came out of this one line ('my name is Legolas') that I didn't even include in the fic! Anyways, thank you for the kudos - and feel happy! Legolas and his friends are all together again!
Little Stone · 29 August 2004 · Chapter 1: The Breaking of the World
That was a beautiful story with a unique ending. It is wonderful to encounter a tale of the end of the world with a theme not of sorrow but of joy. It reminds me of a Czech song which says, approximately, "Sleep is sweet, so I am thankful for tiredness." Your prose is truly lyrical in its simple complexities. It draws in a reader, takes him on a journey and sets him to peace. Thank you for sharing this story.
Author's reply
WOW! This is the bestest review EVER! Seriously, this truly put a smile on my face. This story was the product of about an hours work, and was never beta'd, so you've made me feel REALLY good about myself. Thank you for a well-thought out review. xoxo Cor