Lily Frost · 30 August 2004 · Chapter 1
Lovely!
I find the rain very refreshing and don't understand why people complain about it so much. It's very nice to kiss someone in it.
You have a good grasp of emotion, and the dialogue and descriptions are very well done.
Thank you for sharing, and don't worry about writing angst; so long as it isn't to melodramatic. Many authors here write angst, at least sometimes.
Peace out,
Lily Frost