Reviews of The Sacrifice: The Story of Dis

MysteriousWays · 7 October 2004 · Chapter 7: Kheled-zaram

Hello Miriel! I wanted to let you know that I tracked you down at ff.net and I have included this story on a community I have started there. "Beyond the Fellowship" is an ff.net community whose objective is to bring attention to quality LOTR fan fiction that features non-canon characters. When I got the idea of starting the community I immeadiately thought of this story. I hope you don't mind my including it in the community without asking permission first. If you would rather I remove it I will, but I hope you will let me keep it listed. Peace, Friendship, and chocolate, MysteriousWays a.k.a Kelly

Kitt of Lindon · 1 February 2004 · Chapter 7: Kheled-zaram

The ending was beautiful. I could heartily understand Dis' guilt-you wrote it vividly. I hadn't read any fiction that mentioned Dis before so this was definitly something different.

Orangeblossom Took · 13 September 2003 · Chapter 7: Kheled-zaram

Oh, *snif* That is a beautiful moment at the mirrormere and a very poginant ending.

MysteriousWays · 12 September 2003 · Chapter 7: Kheled-zaram

That was just beautiful. MysteriousWays

Author's reply

Thank you! It took a while to decide on that ending. (Many many late night rewrites as well. :) Cheers!

MysteriousWays · 12 September 2003 · Chapter 1: The Arguement

I am loving this! I have an older brother myself who acts the same way. I am looking forward to reading the rest. MysteriousWays

Orangeblossom Took · 11 August 2003 · Chapter 6: Nevermore...

A fierce and wonderful tale, fitting for a dwarf heroine. Thanks. I wasn't going to put "Oceans that part us" up here until it was completed but, per your kind review on fanfic, I am going to do so right now. Author Reply: Thank you to my first (And so far only!) reviewer. Good, I'm glad. I perfer the formatting on "stories" then ff.n.

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