Lindelea
· 5 August 2003
· Chapter 1: Tea ad Poached Eggs
Very nicely done, with the little details that make you feel as if you are "there", and realistic characterizations, though Elanor sounds a bit old for her age. That's okay, I'm always being told "my" Faramir sounds old for his age... some hobbits just *mature* faster than others...
Zebra Wallpaper
· 4 August 2003
· Chapter 1: Tea ad Poached Eggs
Aw, this was quite nice. Hobbit children DO learn to cook before they learn their letters, don't they? :)
Your Elanor is very cute and I very much like your characterization of Pippin, hangover and all--I like especially that he still maintains his sense of humor and fondness for the little Gamgee.
I would love to see more of this.