Hai Took
· 12 July 2004
· Chapter 1: Passages
That was so beautiful! You wrote Legolas' remberances of different times and his feelings toward death wonderfully! It was very touching and made me cry, thank you!
Author's reply
Forgive me for not responding to your kind review earlier -- I've been in the North Carolina mountains without a computer ::shiver:: for a week. Just now back down to the semi-flat lands. I'm so glad you enjoyed "Passages." Thanks for letting me know!
SilverMoonLady
· 3 July 2004
· Chapter 1: Passages
This was very nice! I like the way you've threaded the same image of the river through the piece, and you've treated their passings with care and respect, evoking the characters in their differences and similarities without diluting or losing their essence. I really liked this piece, thank you for sharing it!
SilverMoonLady
Author's reply
you've treated their passings with care and respect...
I'm so glad it came across that way. Thanks for reading and for your kind comments. Glad you liked it!