Reviews (106)

Nilmandra · 12 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

Shirebound, I have been so far behind lately...but I am glad to catch you at the start of this story. I love your Sam - I hear him, as if he were in the room with me. And how precious light must be to them, after the days of darkness in Mordor. I love Sam's plans too - ever the practical hobbit.

pebbles66 · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

I liked this chapter very much. I had never thought that the Nazgul would still have their rings. Very cool thought. I'm looking forward to more chapters soon.

liptonrm · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Hobbits ever think of anything besides food? Impossible, I don't believe it;-). *giggle* What a lovely chapter. I appreciated how you showed everything coming full circle and how the physical proof of the death of that particular Nazgul would hold a powerful healing for Frodo. Words are useful and soothing, but, at times, actions are so much more important. And, a wonderful depiction of the Frodo/Aragorn relationship, as always.

Connie · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Sorry I'm so slow at getting around to reviewing. I was gone for a couple of days. I really like this chapter. I hadn't thought about Frodo needing closure about the Witch King. It makes sense though. After all he was the one who actually stabbed poor Frodo. It was really a clever idea that Frodo should look for the ring and that it should take both Aragorn and Frodo to properly destroy it. I also like it when Aragorn picked up the hilt of Merry's lost sword. I wonder if he has something in mind to do with it so that all will know the valor of another hobbit besides the Ringbearer. Thanks. Connie.

maya_ar · 9 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

A lovely, touching interlude. I'm looking forward to more. cheers, Maya

Elwen · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

How very, very clever. I had never considered this. What an amazing idea! I stand in awe of your bunnies.

Pearl Took · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Sorry I'm coming to these late. These are wonderful!! I'm eagerly looking forward to the ones that are to follow.

Meldewen Ilce · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Once again, shirebound, you have written a lovely chapter! And once again you have given me something to think about - I never thought on it but it makes sense that they Witch-King's ring of power survived him, though we know it would have lost its power after the destruction of the One Ring. I find it fascinating that Frodo thought to look for it and I am glad Aragorn used Anduril to destroy it (at least its jewel)... Once again, lovely chapter!

melilot hill · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Amazing chapter! I loved it how Aragorn and Frodo worked together to destroy that ring.

Lindelea · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

A nice picture of the aftermath. It never occurred to me that Frodo would be at a loss, shivering at the sound of a twig snap, unfocused and not sure what to do next... but very logical. I love the foresight of leaving the candles handy "just in case". Such loving attention to detail on Aragorn's part... and yours.

Lindelea · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Very nice indeed! You paint pictures with your words. What an interesting idea, that the Black Captain's ring remained, and that Anduril, Aragorn and Frodo working together would destroy it. A question: that statement about who the kings originally were (3 Numenoreans, and 6 M-e), does that come from an appendix somewhere or is that your own?

esamen · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

“Frodo, what are you---” Aragorn’s words died in his throat as a blackened, twisted chunk of metal fell from the inside of the glove. A ring. One of the Nine. Shirebound, you have absolutely outdone yourself this time. This one caught me completely by surprise. I had no idea that you were going there! One of the Nine! This is great stuff! You are really covering new ground! Thanks for all your hard work . . . I just love reading this story. Esamen

cpsings4him · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

Ah! This was perfect! "Frodo’s smile faded as he suddenly remembered with whom he stood. This blazing sword out of legend rested in the hand of... his king. “Frodo...” Aragorn rested a gentle hand on the hobbit’s shoulder. “What is it?” Frodo bit his lip. “You must think hobbits to be without respect or manners. I should be on my knees before you.” He cast his eyes down. “The king has returned,” he whispered in awe. “Frodo,” Aragorn said softly. “I am Strider of the North, still -- and always will be.” He smiled. “I have asked you to bow to no one. Must I make it an order?” " I just loved this part! Frodo, despite all he has endured, all he has done - is still humble. Aragorn, still Strider. Another great chapter! Can't wait for more. :)

girlofring · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

You are so very talented. You do have a way with words, and can pick up on the most underlying of stories, still waiting to be told in Tolkien style. Please keep them coming.

fliewatuet · 8 July 2004 · Chapter 2: The Pelennor Fields -- May 7

An interesting encounter with the remains of the Witch-king. And an unusual but inventive idea to have Frodo find the With-king's ring of power and destroy it with Aragorn's help. A very fitting chapter for the title of the series as it was quite dark in places, but the light prevailed in the end.

Lotrgirl1415 · 6 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

I love this tory! great job! i cant wait till the next update! :) love, Katie

Sigil Galen · 2 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

I think this is a great idea for a set of linked stories, and the beginning piece set a nice tone. I think the two most prevalent symbols in LOTR are Tolkien's uses of light and water, so I'm thrilled to see someone exploring one of those facets. Can't wait to read more!

liptonrm · 1 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

This story has a healing balm in it. The words themselves are somehow soothing and uplifting. Oh light, beautiful, wonderful light. I love Sam's common-sense, the reclaiming of Frodo's memories piece by piece, I love it all. Thank you so much for this, I needed just such a reminder of peaceful, comfortable joy.

Aewyn · 1 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

This is just simply lovely! I think you have captured both Sam and Frodo perfectly, and I liked the fact that Frodo has no idea what to do next and turns to Sam for guidence. Nice touch with the candles chsing away the darkness in both room and thought :) I look forward to see more of this story! Love, Aewyn

Anso the Hobbit · 1 July 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

Wonderful, Shirebound, just wonderful! This is so detailed and loving and hobbity! Thank you.

Periantari · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

I was going to leave a review here but LJ loaded quicker than SoA surprisingly :-0... therefore i'm just going to say nice job on this story! and hope that more will come soon =) ::can't wait:: Thanks, SB~ =) (i like peace fro our dear hobbitses ..and your hobbit peacefulness is written really well =)

Auntiemeesh · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

I like this glimpse of Frodo's struggle to readjust after finding himself alive and safe but suddenly without a purpose.

Mewsette · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

Hi, it's me again. I just posted a review of "Can you Sing, Master Hobbit" which I found so amusing and uplifting, and here's another one that touched my heart in a completely different way. I can't get enough of Sam and Frodo, and dearly love your portrayal of them, and of all the other characters from LotR. I wonder why no one else has really addressed the concept of their being at loose ends without the dangers and darkness of the quest hanging over them? Only you would think of this. This is a wonderful idea and I look forward to your next chapter. Julia

cpsings4him · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

Oh, Shirebound! This is lovely! LOVELY! I know I am really going to enjoy this story. It's off to a beautiful start. Those poor baby hobbits! They have lived in hardship and darkness and pain and being hunted for so long, it's hard for them to remember what normal was like. I look forward to the next chapter. Blessings! cp

Connie · 30 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Ithilien -- April 8

Oh, that was so sweet. I guess I hadn't thought about how hard it would be adjust to not having to plan every move of your life after you've done it for so long. Nice chapter, and nice concept. Connie.