TithenFeredir · 10 August 2005 · Chapter 1: Don't go in the woods
Hmmmm,a very disturbing story, but it depicts something that had to be a reality in Mirkwood. The spiders are a thing that tends to be underplayed in fanfic. I finished this with the feeling that there was more to explore with this idea. Maybe, if careful to stay within the bounds of good taste, you could expand and elaborate on it and make it truly horrifying (in a good way). ~TF