Reviews (16)

Raksha The Demon · 21 December 2005 · Chapter 12: Facing the past

Interesting chapter. Hopefully Faramir will be able to learn from this encounter and then return to life! He's too young to die! (yes, we know he's a fictional character, but we love him anyway) Besides, he hasn't, technically died yet; no mention of his being d-e-a-d. Keep it that way, please! Hope you update soon.

Raksha The Demon · 11 August 2005 · Chapter 11: ..Gang aft a-gley

Vibrant, exciting chapter! You aren't really gonna kill off Faramir, are you? Perish the thought!

lovethosehobbits · 26 June 2005 · Chapter 10: I will fight no more forever

Auggghhh! You devil woman! I am sitting here on the edge of my seat watching these two duel....more soon, ok? tree

harrowcat · 28 April 2005 · Chapter 9: Signs

I was so glad to see more of this story posted as I had enjoyed the beginning of it. Do keep it coming.

Mysterious Jedi · 27 April 2005 · Chapter 9: Signs

So Faramir will be rescued. I would hate to have to try to escape from a Ranger!

brego · 19 December 2004 · Chapter 8: Abducted

i love this story :)

RAKSHA THE DEMON · 17 October 2004 · Chapter 6: Faramir awakes

Good to see the story updated! I liked your having Faramir, weakened from illness and injury as he was, smart enough to recognize people from various odors; it's very Ranger-like. Please keep posting!

RAKSHA THE DEMON · 6 August 2004 · Chapter 4: The King's study

The story seems much improved, the plot is tighter. I'd like to see Aragorn visit Faramir in the Houses of Healing. Minor quibble - if Bergil is now a "man"; then Elrond cannot be in Minas Tirith to be one of Faramir's healers; he sailed to Valinor about four years after the War of the Ring (in the movie; in the book it was two years later). His sons could definitely be visiting Gondor; no one knows when, or if, they left Middle-earth. Keep updating!

Lianna · 6 August 2004 · Chapter 1: Assassination

Great start to your story, but you should check the end of the first chapter. It looks as though your final sentence has been chopped off in the middle.

Patty · 7 July 2004 · Chapter 3: Plotting

Ooh, scary! And just what will be "the means of death"? Please update soon = I like this story!

Raksha The Demon · 17 June 2004 · Chapter 2: Questions and answers

Unless Eomer and Faramir have had an unrecorded adventure together; they would not yet be 'brothers in arms' since at this point they had never fought together. Good idea of bonding Eomer and Faramir through travels and tavern visits. However, Faramir is depicted as more of a drunken schoolboy here. Even drunk, Faramir is at least 36 years old and the Steward of Gondor; he would not throw balls of flour at the Steward's chair and especially not at his King's throne.

Annis · 16 June 2004 · Chapter 2: Questions and answers

again, well done! but much too short! please write more, and soon!

Mysterious Jedi · 16 June 2004 · Chapter 2: Questions and answers

This is a good story, and I look forward to reading more; however, this chapter seems to not be wrapped or something.

Patty · 16 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Assassination

Oh my, surely you're not stopping there! I love Faramir and must know quickly how badly he's hurt!! The dialogue about a little dagger hurting so much is extremely effective = I feel his pain.

Annis · 14 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Assassination

a promising first chapter! I love the title,and can't wait to read more!

JULES6 · 14 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Assassination

Wow, I am enjoying this story already. I liked Faramir and love stories about him. Some really good writing here and a nice plot line to start the ball rolling. I could easily believe that he and Aragorn were friends and became friends. Hope to read more of this story. JULES