Chathol-linn · 20 May 2004 · Chapter 1
A bittersweet retelling of the stories of two traditional girls in Gondor. The writer did a good job evoking the sea images: waves, breeze, shells, sand. The characters of Finduilas and her sister were believable. I liked the technique of using failing handwriting of the letters as a metaphor for the fading of Finduilas. And I liked the name Earlindele. It is accurate enough Sindarin for me to recognize the meaning. Good job! Regards - Chathol-linn
Author's reply
Thank you very much for the feedback! I'm glad you liked it. :)