shirebound · 18 March 2012 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
Just wanted you to know that I still read these stories, I still love them, and I'm so happy you wrote them.
The Early Adventures of Fwo and Unga Bee by cpsings4him
Reviews (27)
FrodoLuver · 11 September 2011 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
OMG THAT WAS LIKE THE CUTEST THING EVER! You are really talented keep it up! :)))
shirebound · 3 November 2009 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
This is truly one of the sweetest tales ever. There are certain stories I re-read when I need a virtual 'snuggle', and this is one of them.
cher · 2 April 2005 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
I'm not sure how I missed this when you up-dated last time, but I just LOVE chapter 4. I can see wee!Frodo! following the butterfly and getting lost, maybe even within sight of Bag End. I loved that Frodo only knew his mother as "Mum-mee" and I could see Bilbo scurrying around, scared, wondering where Frodo had gotten to. Nice touch to have Bell and Hamson finding Frodo, and Hamson wanting a baby brother or sister. (Boy, did he get HIS wish!). Thanks so much for the "angsty-fluff".
Starfire_Moonlight · 18 January 2005 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
I love this!!! I think that its so cute to imagin the ' soon to be Ringbearer' as a little 1 and a half year old lad. And the way you write how Frodo talks is so cute and precious. Makes me smile evderythime I read it. :D
Author's reply
Awww! If I've made someone smile, I've done my job! I'm so happy you enjoyed this. Fwo and Unga Bee are a pleasure and a joy to write. Thanks again! Blessings! cp
nerdinpink · 4 January 2005 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
Awwwww! That was so sweet! It made me squeak no less than 10 times.
Author's reply
Heheh! Thank you, Nerdinpink (adorable name, by the way!)! I'm so glad you found it squeakable! :D
Hobbit Lass21 · 1 January 2005 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
Ooo.....pass me a bucket, I've melted!! Just what I needed today, more Fwo! I found myself freaking out along with Bilbo when they realized poor Frodo was lost!! TBC, Thank goodness!! I'd be perfectly contented if you wrote it forever... *walks off gushing and melting all over the floor*
Author's reply
Heheh...hope you've managed to re-solidify since this review! :D Thank you so much for reading and leaving such a sweet, enthusiastic review! I assure you I'll keep writing Fwo and Unga Bee as long as the bunnies keep biting! :D Thank you, again! Blessings! cp
Hobbit Lass21 · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
Still smiling!! I'm realizing that I have been sorely without my daily Fwo fix.... He's so sweet an' he knows it!! I love the 'nugga' lessons! Honestly, I'm going to need to compile a dictionary of these terms, otherwise my family won't be able to understand me. I've already started sayin' tee-tat..... ^_^ Please continue, you have dozens of loyal fans who are greatly desiring more!!
Hobbit Lass21 · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
Still cannot keep from smiling!! I'm purring inside...tee-tat.......^_^!!!! Once again, thank you SO SO SO SO MUCH for brightening my day!!
Hobbit Lass21 · 28 December 2004 · Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins
^_^ This is so cute!! I need to save this, to read on a sad day. 'Dab-dalp da gwey!!" I can't stop smiling. I simply can't, nor do I want to!! Thank you SO much!
Illyria · 18 November 2004 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
Oh, and I forget to tell you that the end scene, with the towel cocoon and Frodo insisting on staying to be Unga Bee's tatapiwwah, and Bilbo asking him if he really wouldn't want wings of himself, and Bilbo's gentle dream... I love that, very, very much.
Author's reply
Awww! I'm glad you liked that fluffy moment! :D
Illyria · 18 November 2004 · Chapter 4: "Adventures in the Garden...And Beyond!"
Ooooh, CP, this is simply adorable!!!! I love Frodo's adventures with the butterfly, and Hamson! :) I really enjoyed reading this, CP. Thank you so much!
Author's reply
I'm sorry I'm just now getting around to saying, "thank you" so much for the sweet review! I'm so thankful for each one. I know they say that reviews shouldn't matter, and I suppose I would keep writing no matter how few I got, but well, you know they are always welcome and so appreciated. Thank you! *hugs!*
Obelia medusa · 15 November 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
Just when I thought this couldn't get any better... you give us Sleepy Baby Fwo. *dies of happiness* "Frodo lay sleeping on his belly, long dark lashes pressed into his soft, round baby cheeks, flushed pink with deep slumber. At intervals, his rosebud lips, pressed slightly open against the coverlet, worked at the little thumb that had found it's familiar way into his mouth soon after Bilbo had put him down." This is a dangerous story to read in lab; it's so hard to stop myself from squeeing! :-\
Author's reply
Oh! Another sweet review!!!!! Thank you so much! I just LOVE to watch babies sleeping - there's just nothing sweeter! And, when it's a baby Frodo hobbit - even better! :-) Thank you again! By the way, in case you haven't seen it yet, chapter 4 is now up! Blessings! cp
Obelia medusa · 15 November 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
Aaarggggh!!! *keels over from insulin shock* This is too, too precious. :P How do you do baby talk so well?! I can just hear Frodo's baby voice in my mind... And a kitten now! Adorable. *recovers from insulin shock long enough to click on "next chapter"*
Author's reply
Oh, no! Another one dead from the baby Fwo sweetness!! Hehe! Thank you so much for your sweet review! QUOTE: How do you do baby talk so well?! Well, Fwo's speech pattern is mainly modeled after a couple of toddlers I have known in my life - namely, Molly and Cody (my husband's cousins' two children). We had lots of fun with them when they were learning to talk! Thank you again for reading and reviewing! :D
bobo baggins · 24 September 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
I think I am on fluff overload! This is way too cute for my own good! I am so glad Shirebound directed me to your stories! They are too precious! Please update soon, I want to know what other mischief Fwo can get into with his Unga Bee!
Author's reply
Oh no! Not FLUFF!Overload! Hehe! Shirebound is such a sweetie for reccing my story! Update is coming soon! :-) Thank you for taking the time to review!
Lily · 12 June 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
THANK YOU! This chapter will have me smiling all evening.
Author's reply
I'm sorry it's taken me this long to get around to saying THANK YOU for the review! I really do appreciate you taking the time to leave me a comment. More coming soon! :)
Ariel · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
I don't know if my blood sugar can take this much sweetness... Don't you know things that are this cute cause angst mavens to go into sugar shock? Quick! Angst me! Stat! Hheheheheeheh. Very nicely done, my dear. Ariel
Author's reply
Good grief! I can't believe I'm just NOW getting around to replying to your sweet review of my little fic! I'm very ashamed! Thank you so much for taking the time to review it. Sorry about the sugar overload! Hehe! But what a way to go, huh?!? :-)
FantasyFan · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
Baby sleep! Snuggles and Nibbles! More kitten! You must have a list of the fluffiest, sweetest, most puddle-inducing things, and you're going to trot them out, one at a time, for the chapters to this fic. I'm waiting for fingerpaint and a milk-mustache (or whatever you think up - it will be better than that, I'm sure.) My daughter Raven and I are still going around saying, 'Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww.' Each of these chapters is a gem, THANK YOU.
Author's reply
I'm so ashamed that I'm just now replying to your sweet review of my story! Thank you so much for taking the time to review it...it really does mean a lot to me! I'll have more Fwo and Unga Bee up very soon! :-)
Arwen Baggins · 10 June 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
Well, Frodo's quite a smart baby. Perhaps even to smart for his own good...perhaps. Could it be?
Author's reply
Oh yes! Definately too smart for his own good! Remember what Primula said about him in the first chapter? "The enormous blue eyes that looked at her were utterly innocent and devoid of malice, but Primula knew her son well enough to know that “no twouba” was not a likely thing. A sweeter, more loving (and loveable) child was not to be found anywhere in the Shire, but Frodo’s bright and curious mind often got him into situations his eighteen and one quarter months of living had not prepared him to deal with." We will see that bright and curious mind get him into some things he's not quite ready for - very soon! Thank you for reading and leaving a review! Blessings! cp
Breon Briarwood · 9 June 2004 · Chapter 3: "Adventures in Waking"
Oh my gawd! This is just too precious! Every time I see there's been an update for this I get this huge sappy grin that won't go away. (not that I want it to...) Gotta love Fwo's logic and reasoning in this! The mind of that child is just too... too... *gush* I'm just gonna go read it again! Don't take too long for the next one! Nibbles! :D
Author's reply
LOL! So happy to have helped to put a huge sappy grin on your face! I am having so much fun writing this! Chapter 4 will be coming soon! Thank you so much for continuing to read! Blessings! cp
Lily · 29 May 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
Thanks to Hobbnit Lily Baggins I found this truly amazing story. I haven't read something that cute ( UN-CA BEEEEEE!) in a long time. Aw, that was so cute....* imagines Frodo rtying to climb up his " unca"'s legs*. And there is going to be more - great. Lily habby.
Author's reply
LOL! Your review really made me smile! Thanks for reading! Oh...and a new chappie is now up! Chapter 3 - "Adventures in Waking"
FantasyFan · 26 May 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
Count me among those who have melted into a puddle of goo over this story. I'll just share a bucket with my daughter, who can't stop walking around saying, "Awwwwwwwww!" After the first chapter, I thought you couldn't top the cute, but of course the only thing cuter than baby Fwo is baby Fwo with a kitten! One thing I love is even though it's all about adorable baby cuteness, Fwo definitely has a personality here: he's going to grow up to be adventuresome and curious and loving and grounded in the Shire. Not to mention adorable. And he'll have loving memories of his Unga Bee - thanks for that.
Author's reply
LOL! Yes - nothing ups the cute anty like a baby AND a kitten, huh? Hehe! I'm so glad you liked it. I will keep you (and your daughter) safely in your bucket until such time as you can be molded back together! :) Thank you so much for your thoughtful comments about Fwo having a personality! It REALLY made my day! I was so worried about making him 'flat' and one-dimensional...that's not Frodo at ALL! He was nothing if not multilayered! More coming soon! Thanks for reading and reviewing! Reviews really do mean a lot to! Blessings! cp
illyria · 22 May 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
Oooo...and I'm purring too! What lovely, fluffy tale! I adore it! It left me with a smile and warm, fuzzy feeling inside. Bless you!
Author's reply
Thank you so much! I'm glad it brought warm and fuzzy feelings and a smile to go with them! Your review really means a lot to me - especially after reading your comments on reviews on LJ...it makes it twice as special! Blessings! cp
Breon Briarwood · 21 May 2004 · Chapter 2: Breakfast Adventures
I swear, I'm just going to melt into a big gooey puddle! This almost makes me want another one.... almost. (I'll just content myself with your version. ;D ) ~Frodo's look back was also wide eye as he cupped his mouth with his hands and whispered conspiratorially, "Beebee beahw hundwey, Unga Bee!"~ Too cute! You really do have the baby thing down. I need more fluff!
Author's reply
QUOTE: "This almost makes me want another one...." LOL! Fwo seems to have that effect on people! One reader's comment, where I posted it on my live journal was, "I think my ovaries just exploded!" - LOL! That little stinker has a way of getting the baby juices flowing, does he not! If more fluff is what you're wanting, come see us at live journal - there are lots of hobbity folk there, plus lots of fluffy stories that never end up on a stories sight, but are wonderful none the less - and in fact, there is a community there devoted specifically to hobbit fluff! You can start at my LJ page, then just explore from there! Hope to see you there soon! Oh...here's the link! http://www.livejournal.com/users/cpsings4him/ Thank you for reading and reviewing! Blessings! cp
Lindelea · 18 May 2004 · Chapter 1: The Adventure Begins
TBC? Hoorah! Very nice descriptions, made me long for "baby days" to return again. Your baby talk rings true and yet is not difficult to read (which takes skill in writing, let me tell you! So many times I'm annoyed rather than charmed by written baby talk!). “Well then, it’s a good thing I’ve got two hands, isn’t it?” Somehow this witticism on Bilbo's part sounds very much in character. Thanks for a pleasant read, just perfect for an insomnia-plagued night. Think I'll go back and give the pillow another chance with this bit of sweetness to chew on.
Author's reply
Oh! Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I really appreciate your comments. I'm so glad you found Fwo's 'baby talk' to have a ring of truth to it. I really struggled over it because I know just what you mean about being annoyed by some attempts at 'baby talk' that I have read. Sometimes you wonder if these folks have ever met a toddler. Also, I'm glad that Bilbo came across sounding in his own witty character. Hope it gave you some pleasant WEE!Fwo! dreams! More to come soon! Blessings! cp