Grey Wonderer · 10 May 2004 · Chapter 2: Part 2
Loved this one on the challenge the last time and so I wanted to leave a review here also. I love how you have showed Merry's worry while waiting for his friends to arrive. It fits nicely with the book and gives insight into Merry's anxiety. I had never thought much about Merry being concerned too much until I read your story even though he does come to hunt them in the book. See, you showed me something that I had over-looked while reading Tolkien! You are amazing!
Author's reply
I never thought much about Merry and Fredegar until Marigold handed me this, either. Thank you for being my first reviewer! I see you have a new story up--I'm off to see what little pipster thinks about his sisters (I sort of make light of it myself). Take care! Pippinfan