Promises to Keep by Nessime

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SimplegirlfromLP · 14 May 2019 · Chapter 1: Promises to Keep

Clever, I enjoyed that. I wasn’t sure it was the horse until Eomer calls the horses over. Enjoyed this very much.

lwarren · 6 May 2004 · Chapter 1: Promises to Keep

What a neat story! Had an idea it was one of the two horses thinking about a third of the way through. As I read, I kept hoping it was from Arod's POV, but Hasufel's is just as good! You do well in first person, and your blending with book canon is seamless. I really enjoyed this very much...would like to hear Arod's POV on the elf, tho'!!! ;) linda

rhiannon · 4 May 2004 · Chapter 1: Promises to Keep

What a great story! I had no idea it was written from Hasufel's perspective until I got to the end. Then I had to go back to the beginning to read it again. As a horse lover, really enjoyed this story.

Lindorien · 4 May 2004 · Chapter 1: Promises to Keep

wow! I didn't expect it to be the horse's view! smart horse. I liked this Nessime; nice use of first person, nice pacing, holds the interest. I presumed it to be a soldier of the eored until Eomer called the horses forward. Thanks for writing! Lindorien