Song of Three by Avon
Raksha The Demon · 1 July 2006 · Chapter 1: Song of Three
First-rate poetical triad. The old druid connection works wonderfully here. I personally see Faramir as a falcon, rather than a raven, but ravens have had interesting roles in folklore. I am a promise: of things that will come - lovely allusion to Faramir in his capacity of herald of the King's return. Quietly beautiful piece of fanfiction.
Linda Hoyland · 30 June 2006 · Chapter 1: Song of Three
Just beautiful !
Nancy Brooke · 13 June 2004 · Chapter 1: Song of Three
Great ... I loved your imagery as much as your restraint and the equal parts strength and sadness with which you mixed this poem.
Author's reply
Gosh, *blush* thanks! Avon
Nienna Elanesse · 21 May 2004 · Chapter 1: Song of Three
Well done, although I cannot judge meters other than iambic pentameter! Faramir as a raven? You do know the raven is one of Queen Mab's avatars, don't you? (She's Welsh not Irish, but that's what I always thought Gondor stood for: Roman-era Wales.) It's difficult enough writing something that can be read aloud or recited. Thank you for this little gift. :)
Author's reply
Hi Nienna, (if I may shorten your name so) No, I had no idea that a raven was one of Queen Mab's avatars - but that's very interesting, as is Gondor as Roman-era Wales. Certainly makes a change from all those who see it as Mediteranean. I borrowed the equation of Faramir with a raven from my friend Fileg so I've also passed your comment on to her as I know she'll be interested. Anyway, I'm very pleased to know that you liked it and thank you for taking the time to leave feedback. Avon
Lois · 27 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Song of Three
This is lovely, and subtly powerful. Might not Aragorn want to be an eagle rather than a hawk, though? Thorongil and all that... bests, L.
Author's reply
*Bangs heada on wall* Indeed, oh indeed! ;-) Someone else pointed this out on a yahoogroup too - so much for my attempts at deep and meaningful ;-) I will change it (once I've decided *how*)- and thank you very much for pointing it out. Cheers, Avon