Hai · 21 April 2004 · Chapter 5: Mallor, of Gondor
Those were all beautiful and well written! I love how each soldier regarded the hobbits in their own way. I think my favorite was Hallas but they were all so good it is hard to choose, thank you!
The Soldiers by Holdur
Reviews (13)
shirebound · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 5: Mallor, of Gondor
I came late to this story, but I'm just awestruck. With every chapter it grew deeper and more emotional, and... that ending!! You should be very proud of yourself -- this is a wonderful tale.
Anso the Hobbit · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 3: Aldor, of Rohan
I really like this story! Very good characterisations! It´s interesting to see the hobbits throught hte perspecitve of the soldiers. Great work.
Bluegrass Elf · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 5: Mallor, of Gondor
That was one of the most beautiful stories I have ever read!
pipfan · 18 April 2004 · Chapter 4: Eradan, of Gondor
Oh. My. Goodness. This is simply amazing. Your imagry is amazing, the wording fabulous. This is one of the best fanfics I have ever read. You have outdone yourself. Absolutely stunning.
Bluegrass Elf · 18 April 2004 · Chapter 4: Eradan, of Gondor
Beautiful story!
JULES6 · 17 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Deor, of Rohan
Hi Holdur, This is my favourite paragraph of your wonderful little story, even though it is the last one: Merry!” Even as he is swept away, Pippin reaches back for Merry. Only Gandalf’s steady hands keep the hobbit on the horse. As if Pippin’s last cry jolted him into action, Merry darts after them and out of the stables. If he could, he would fly and pluck Pippin from Gandalf’s grasp and hold him forever. So reflective of Merry's thoughts and his feelings as Pippin is taken away from him, even if it is to protect and keep him safe. JULES
Bluegrass Elf · 17 April 2004 · Chapter 3: Aldor, of Rohan
Oh, you wrote more!! YAY!!!!
Bluegrass Elf · 17 April 2004 · Chapter 2: Hallas, of Gondor
Beautiful! I'm so glad you wrote more!
HisieLome · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Deor, of Rohan
Nice storm imagery. Very interesting take on hobbits and Gandolf. Please continue. Thank you for all of your hard work. Mina Sedth, Hisie Lome
Bluegrass Elf · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Deor, of Rohan
Very nice! Hope you write more!
snowballjane · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Deor, of Rohan
An interesting perspective on the scene, with some wonderful description. The storm image is carried nicely. I look forward to seeing scenes from the POV of other soldiers.
Grey Wonderer · 16 April 2004 · Chapter 1: Deor, of Rohan
This is a very different look at the hobbits and I enjoyed this very much. I also thought it told a great deal about Gandalf as he was observed to want to give comfort if he had the time to do so. Lovely story. Hope there is moe.