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elliska · 17 February 2005 · Chapter 14: Restore VII

I was so happy to get this update email! But I was at work and had to wait four hours to read it! Another great chapter. I like the relationship you have established between Amroth and Thranduil. The elfling seems very sweet but also smart--smart enough to read his question troubled Thranduil. And that question does have to be weighing on his mind at this point. Along with, "When is Adar coming back!" :) I think it is interesting that Thranduil seems to have a good idea that ruling kingdoms is part of his future. You have to wonder how much Oropher knew/wanted/expected when he went East. I completely agree with the thought you put forward about his reasoning for leaving. And all those thoughts were an excellent backdrop to the 'encounter.' Ooo, not good. Poor Thranduil. I felt for him there. But I like the way he handled it. He tried to be gentle but was his typical firm self when pushed. Perfectly in character there from my point of view. I really liked that part. And you had me scared for a minute with the last part. Those 'I can't believe what I'm seeing' moments can have very bad consequences. But like a good 'brother' Galadhmir waited to get all the info before jumping to conclusions. Thanks Heavens. This last line was great. I like your humor a great deal! Again, I was so happy to see this. I love your stories and I'll wait however long it takes for school to slow down a little. But really, Coriel--I advised college freshmen for 15 years. I would never have advised anyone to take 18 hours. Those freshmen courses (especially at a good private school like yours) are designed to teach you more than content. Don't over do. Go slowly enough that you can enjoy your experience as well as obtain your degree in a reasonable time. For someone like you, who obviously loves to learn, college should be fun too. Sorry--too many years stressing over my freshmen advisees to be able to stay off that soap box. It sounds like you have some great classes. Have a great semester.

TithenFeredir · 17 February 2005 · Chapter 14: Restore VII

Interesting. There is very little action in this chapter, quite a lot of musing and a broken relationship, but I found myself reading on quite eagerly. The chapter had a strong mood to it; the atmosphere complimented Thranduil's thoughts and his encounter with Elemmire very well. And I loved that little punch line you threw in at the last. Big chuckle there! TF

Stephanie · 10 February 2005 · Chapter 1: Rise

I love the manner in which you write. You certainly have the utmost command of your pen! I loved this chapter! The only thing that was wrong, due to my own ignorance, is that I do not know who some of these characters are. Can you tell me what book(s) to read so that I can get acquainted with these wonderful characters so that I can fully enjoy your well written work? I have read some of Tolkien's work but not all of it. Your story really gets me interested in more of it.

TithenFeredir · 23 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

The uncomfortable interplay between Thranduil, Celeborn and Galdriel was fun to read. Galadriel is certainly formidible. Thranduil is getting quite a checkered resume with all he is required to do to keep the household afloat. Re: the choice of his horse's name...what sprang to mind was a line from one of the Indiana Jones movies: Saleh to Indie- "They named you after the dog??" ;-D TF

TithenFeredir · 22 January 2005 · Chapter 12: Restore V

I anticipated an eventual showdown between Thranduil and Alkarinwe and I believe you delivered it--in the most unexpected and ingenious way. For that feud to end in repentance and forgiveness was quite moving. The passing of the two horses was also very sad. I thought it was very sweet the way the family hovered over Thranduil. I kept waiting for him to unburden himself on somebody, but again you witheld the expected device for a greater effect. Always leave them wanting more, eh? :-D TF

ponypetter · 22 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

Somehow I get the impression Daddy might be a little mad when he gets home and finds Thranduil is babysitting Galadriel's son! The scene between Thranduil and Galadriel was priceless. I like how you made her somewhat cool towards Thranduil as well. It's nice to see that she's not wholely maganimous towards all, which is how she is often portrayed in fics. I think it will do them all good for Thranduil and Amroth to spend time together. I am curious that you assumed Amroth's parents were Celeborn and Galadriel, and he's not the son of Amdir. It's not too farfetched, I grant you, but I hope we'll get to see how he becomes Amdir's heir. I always thought taking that approach would be interesting.

TithenFeredir · 22 January 2005 · Chapter 11: Restore IV

Thranduil seems very secure in his authority dealing with Malach and Melian, and as fair as he could be under the circumstances. He managed them well. The interlude with his mother was very sweet. He's taking care of everyone in the household. I love your Thranduil! TF

TithenFeredir · 21 January 2005 · Chapter 10: Restore III

Things are getting interesting in Lindon! Thranduil's longing for his father and his taking confort in his old equine friend were touching--more so since Alkarinwe interrupts it so brutally. I'm impressed by how insightfully you write. I assume you are fairly young, being in college, and if so you are writing far beyond your years, IMHO. TF

TithenFeredir · 21 January 2005 · Chapter 9: Restore II

It's interesting, every one of these chapters is like a snapshot with its own point to make and although they are not directly connected there is a nice flow forward. Many stories get bogged down with detail trying to connect everything together, but you have achieved a tidy narrative by hitting selected high points. Each one is written so vividly that I see them clearly. Very nice. TF

TithenFeredir · 21 January 2005 · Chapter 8: Restore

The bit with the rose was hilarious. I loved it that to him it was a little accomplishment on his part and no big deal, but she read all kinds of stuff into it. Poor Lindoriel, he's just not that into you...yet. And I wonder if the last part with the ledger is a taste of the origins of Thranduil's often overestimated love of treasure later on. The ride on the beach was beautifully worded. TF

TithenFeredir · 19 January 2005 · Chapter 7: Rebuild III

Seeing Oropher and Gil-galad together I can't help thinking of their end. Loved the tender moment between Thrandil and his naneth.(I have an grown son--you got it right)Can't wait to see what happens next! TF

TithenFeredir · 19 January 2005 · Chapter 6: Rebuild II

Oh, that was fun! Thranduil wasn't given the black eye, he fought for it! I chuckled all the way through this. I'm glad Thranduil has brightened a bit. I'm sure it's not the last we'll hear from Alkarinwe. TF

TithenFeredir · 19 January 2005 · Chapter 5: Rebuild

Interesting. The sterile newness, the dust, the rough-hewn wood,the noise, it all adds to Thranduil's feeling of oppression and yet it seems to mirror his bleak discontent as well. It was a treat to see a young, relatively naive Elrond. So enjoying this story! TF

TithenFeredir · 18 January 2005 · Chapter 4: Rise IV

What a slimeball Alkarinwe is! And many balls are rolling now. I loved the threat of war coming on a like a storm but not a storm. This chapter was really vivid and exciting. Woo-hoo! On to the next! TF

TithenFeredir · 18 January 2005 · Chapter 3: Rise III

This was an interesting combination: the intimate moment between Oropher and Loriel that shows the quality of their relationship, and then more detail of their past suffering and their concerns about Thranduil. You put the fall of Doriath and their flight in personal terms and so made it very tragic, but not overwrought. Angst with a light touch like this is quite effective, I think. On to the next! TF

Ginger Rich · 16 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

Ahh, nothing like a nice upbeat no-worries type of chapter. It was a welcome break from the intense chapters previous to this one. I quite liked the scripture in it too. It fit well. Hmm, I must say it was vonderful. Quiet, peaceful, and fluffy. haha. Okay. I don't wanna keep you from that NEXT chapter you're writing, so I must take my leave. Toodles and great job once again.

Marnie · 16 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

Yes, I know I'm shameless and only review when Celeborn's around. Sorry! But it was a lovely surprise to see him turn up here. What a grand entrance :) Loved the spiky conversation between Celeborn and Thranduil - they are both of them rather formidable aren't they! Oh, and Thranduil vainly admiring himself in the mirror gave me a chuckle - it reminded me of Cassie Clare's Fellowship Diaries; 'still the prettiest' ;) Amroth was just lovely! I liked his mad, childish enthusiasm for everything; and indeed I like the fact that you've gone down the route of having him as Celeborn's son rather than Amdir's. (You can tell I like that theory; I've adopted it too :) Your Galadriel really is quite creepy! I can see why Oropher is so wary of her. Loved all the references to Oropher and Celeborn's big row. Coincidentally they've been shouting at each other in my new fic too; over the same old subject. Fabulous colour and pagentry! And you really show why the members of this House are going to be such big movers and shakers throughout elvish history. They are *such* impressive characters :)

TithenFeredir · 15 January 2005 · Chapter 2: Rise II

The story moves forward, but what is most enjoyable at this point is the little bits of characterization and the hints of what daily life has been like for those refugee elves. I tend to think of male elves as very powerful beings of great presence,more so the way you write them,so the image of them in the kitchen is so fun. I imagine all of their sauces were completely without lumps! I really liked the way you wove in all those references to how they were all having to deal with their grief and how they chafed under the subtle oppression of living in debt under the Noldorin culture. They are all ripe for a change, whether they realize it or not. The best thing about coming to this late is not having to wait for the next chapter! *gleefully rubs hands together* TF

TithenFeredir · 14 January 2005 · Chapter 1: Rise

What a great beginning! Oropher has always been "the late" to me, it is wonderful to see him brought to life! I love your troubled young Thranduil, so full of doubt. Your imagery is very good; the story played in my head like a movie. You did a nice blending of the larger historical references with intimate little details, like the way the fiddled with their hair. The ending has me stoked to read on! TF

elliska · 13 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

Oh this one was rich! So Oropher could not resist an argument and needed some restraint, hmmm? Love that and all the banter surrounding Celeborn's history with the House of Oropher. I also enjoyed Thranduil first real adult meeting with Galadriel and the position you have put him in with young Amroth. That will have more value in the future than Celeborn realizes, I think. Amroth is very nicely done--the fire of young elven spirit certainly shows in him. Lots of nice details here too. Thranduil's new horse's name!? Very funny. "It was Menegroth all over again" was a great line. And the whole last part with Thranduil thinking about Galadriel's reaction to all this and his wry humor was great. I love that aspect of your Thranduil's personality. So happy to see another update! Have a good semester. I imagine it's starting soon if it hasn't already.

Silent Planet · 13 January 2005 · Chapter 13: Restore VI

Very lovely. The scripture passage fits very well. I like how Thranduil has grown so much over the course of the story. The horses name was particularly amusing....I wonder how Legolas would feel if he heard that? Well anyway. This is one of those few stories I check nearly everyday for updates. I love reading it and hope you update soon.

elliska · 8 January 2005 · Chapter 12: Restore V

How tragic. You do an exceptional job of writing the introspections of these characters and I love that sort of thing. Thranduil's thoughts as he realized that he did want to forgive Alkarin were perfect. And the poor horses on top of everything else. Being from Kentucky and thoroughly loving horses, that was almost harder to read than the rest. The end between Thranduil and Lindóriel was appropriately frsutrating for all. I love the romance between them. You are doing a great job with it.

Amaniel · 23 December 2004 · Chapter 12: Restore V

You know you had better post the next one quickly, or I'm going to be after you about what's happening next.... This was a great chapter, as usual! You did a nice job with the ledge scene which I'm certain was difficult to write. I'm not sure I fully understand about the circumstances with the investigation surrounding the death of Alkarin though. Overall you did an amazing job, once again, and I am eagerly looking forward to your next chapter.

Eruanneth_Luin · 22 December 2004 · Chapter 12: Restore V

Oh Coriel, such a bittersweet chapter! Thranduil going his own way once again encountering unexpected and this time tragic circumstances. It is good that elves are hardier than Men or Thruanduil would have come down with pneumonia or worse after enduring that ordeal. How I share his thoughts of those going to meet the judgement they have earned, but wishing to spare them that grievous end. And the care shown by his 'family' again expressing so well the love of this noble people for each other, even to the extent of forgiving Alkarinwë at the last. The deaths of two blameless horses in part to the decisions of their masters, showed that bad temper or even good intentions can go have far-reaching consequences. But at least Banner had at the last the company of his master in loving concern. I could not agree more with Lindóriel. Thranduil is FRUSTRATING! Granted, long courtships were probably not uncommon, but at least he could let her know his heart is hers and not be so stubbornly persistent in keeping his distance. Valar protect her if she ever showed an interest in another elf! Or perhaps it would be the male elf foolish enough to wish to court Lindóriel that would require protection. The chapter came to an end much too soon. I shall wait impatiently for the next one. Thank you in advance.

ponypetter · 21 December 2004 · Chapter 12: Restore V

This is one of my favorite stories. I love the character you give Thranduil. I get confused with all the characters, but you do a great job portraying their relationships in each chapter.