Reviews (12)

jules · 14 July 2004 · Chapter 9: Loeg Ningloron

oh please update, don't just leave us here.... I confess I am one of those (I suspect many) who have been reading and enjoying this but neglecting to review. I am in awe of the detail you have put into every chapter and very impressed by the research you have obviously done. You certainly do paint a picture with words. Please don't leave our poor ranger here, we want to see him get safely to Mirkwood, rid himself of the loathesome Gollum, and then enjoy some well-earned rest (if that's not too much to ask). Don't make us (and poor Aragorn) wait too much longer!

bumper · 9 June 2004 · Chapter 9: Loeg Ningloron

this is great, a wonderful story, i have been reading it on fan fiction too, and cann't wait to read the final draft. oh an pay no attention to mat117, he goes arround saying he hates everyones stories.

striders girl · 3 May 2004 · Chapter 9: Loeg Ningloron

The chapter to this story was really discriptive! I love how you are able to bring the characters to life through simple description. You must have studied the world of Tolkien really well to come this far. Well done!

webster · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 8: On the Borders of Lothlórien

Thanks for the update, it really continues the story along the path I like so much.

strider's girl · 19 April 2004 · Chapter 8: On the Borders of Lothlórien

this is a brillient chapter! i like the description of lothlorien. the elvish additions are really good. keep up the good work!

strider's girl · 13 April 2004 · Chapter 7: Flight to the Riddermark

once again the chapter is brillient! The elvish added in makes it feel a little bit more middle-earthy. The discription of Rohan is excellent. You must have studied the books really hard to bring the landscape to life!

Elvenesse · 10 April 2004 · Chapter 6: Passage Over Emyn Muil

This is a realistic protrayal of Aragorn's searching and finding of Gollum, and I dread to think how he could have withstood 50 days dragging him to Mirkwood.

strider's girl · 10 April 2004 · Chapter 6: Passage Over Emyn Muil

Once again such a marvelous chapter! The description is excellent and sets the scene well! I like how you've created Gollum: perfect! I can imagine his every move! Wonderful. Keep up the good work!

websterans · 7 April 2004 · Chapter 3: Ithilien

Delightfully heroic, and a fine portrayal of the Morgul darkness. The seamless blending of doubt, despair and physical poison is effective in conveying Tolkien's picture of the Black lands

strider's girl · 6 April 2004 · Chapter 5: The Dead Marshes

once again i love how much you put description into the story. Gollum is presemted very well. I like how you make Gollum Smeagol and then Gollum. Very entertaining story, keep up the good work! I'm enjoying this very much!

strider's girl · 1 April 2004 · Chapter 4: Journey to the Morannon

This is a really good story! THe description is very accurate. I can picture all that is happening in my mind. It's truely amazing that you've caught the essence of the characters. Keep up the good work!

striders girl · 27 March 2004 · Chapter 2: The Shadow of the Morgul Vale

This is a really good story! I like the description and how the characters are created! Keep up the good work!