What is Crooked Cannot Be Made Straight by Nina the powerwriter
Raksha The Demon · 22 January 2005 · Chapter 2: The Horn of Gondor
Nice story! It's typical of Denethor that he is concentrating more on his dead son than on the son who still lives, not to mention the rest of Gondor, at this point; this is where Denethor begins to sharply decline...
Dreamflower · 11 October 2004 · Chapter 2: The Horn of Gondor
A good beginning. I'm looking forward to more.
Author's reply
Thank you!
Kitt of Lindon · 8 March 2004 · Chapter 1: A Crystal Coffin of Water
You wrote in first person very skillfully. (I am very sure is called 'first person'.) And you did great at capturing the essence of the moment. I caught one little misspelling in the summary. It should be 'bears' instead of 'bares'. (I simply couldn't wonder off without telling you.) Cheers!