Reviews (109)

Anonymous · 12 January 2017 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Please finish the story! I love how well you write and your development of the characters. Your unique plot is also highly commendable! This is one of the best tales I have read in a while. So please keep up the good work! Thanks!:)

Marianel · 24 October 2015 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Im sorry I meant to say that it feels almost unnatural to supress so much of a person character.A Swedish word sneaked in from the wordlist in my phone-sjöresa. It actually means sea travel which is fairly fitting for elves too by coinsidence!😄

Marianel · 24 October 2015 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Please finish this story, its fascinating how you depict the Avari. Up to now I always though the Avari to be some more like other elves in their minds. Ofcourse they stand out and seems secretive and its possible they had other tradition s as most people or nations do.But your take on the Avari is very special and sometimes I feel sorry for them the unforgiving way they look at things and that they never(?) seem to enjoy themselves or do something other than duty.Its almost unnatural for a living being to sjöresa so much of their character.This is very interesting indeed.Please consider to update!

Modelspice · 31 December 2014 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Hey hey It's been a few years since I first read this story, and I've been faithfully checking regularly for updates. I'd be very happy if you would update your fans to this story with your feedback in the not too distance future. Thank you

ellon · 25 November 2013 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

please oh please oh please finish this story!!!! :(

SuperFan · 18 July 2013 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Please oh please ohnPLEASE!!!!!!!! Finish this story! I'm dying to figure out what happens. Not only am I completely fascinated with your take on the Avari, the romantic tension between Legolas and Rhinure is some of the best I've ever read. I love this story so please finish it!

shadowfax · 10 July 2010 · Chapter 9: All is Best Though We Oft Doubt

I like Thranduil's use of possessive in terms of Rhinure: 'His little Princess would handle the matter.' He's getting fond of his daughter-in-law!

Manuvern · 25 March 2010 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

I cant wait for the next chapter! The romance plot is outstanding and blends excellently with action. Hopefully a new chapter will be ready soon?

Miss · 6 March 2010 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Nice chapter, very intens!! She has build thick brickwalls around her heart. She cannot love, but she can satisfy her lust.

shadowfax · 10 January 2010 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Amazing chapter. But much more amazing to see this story being updated again!!! I hope you do not abandon it again and the updates are much more frequent now. About the chapter: A relief to see them actually discussing and talking about things close to their heart. Especially Rhinure. Their relationship has, for the most part, been physical and it will be interesting to see the actual 'bonding' between the 'Bonded'. Rhinure's denial of love isn't surprising. Her cold and dismal childhood coupled with the Avari upbringing and the demands of being Sacrifice have all combined to make her hide her heart so deep. The Lost Ones plot is so interesting. Hoping to hear more on that in the next chapter. If they act lost no longer then would it mean that L and R are ambushed and the Gondor trip happens not?

daw the minstrel · 30 December 2009 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

I did enjoy it, Fan! In particular, you do sexual tension better than anyone.

Prego · 30 December 2009 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Welcome back! I really like this fic, and the sudden appearance of a new chapter probably made my day! :D I do see a step forward in the chapter - Rhinure certainly opened up a little bit more than usual, and Legolas seems more accepting of her reluctance to let go. Perhaps seeing two other loving couples interacting will give them food for thought; Rhinure can't have had much interaction with other races and that will be interesting to see. I can imagine Arwen and Éowyn will want to befriend her, and she'll have much in common with the Shieldmaiden. Maybe I'm wrong, but I sense that Rhinure's reluctance with love has to do with the aftermath of her father's death and with her childhood in general. I'd like to see Legolas discuss her family with her - if not Sarniel, then Barion, whom he must have known well, if he was his mother's bodyguard. Can't wait to see how the Lost Ones plot develop - I really hope to see a new chapter soon ;) Prego

daw the minstrel · 30 December 2009 · Chapter 12: What’s Love Got to do with it?

Boy, poor Rhinure and Legolas seem to be going round and round over the same sad ground. Evidently something else is going to have to happen go make them get out of their rut. The last scene is interesting. We'll see what it produces. Good to have you back, Fan.

Miss · 4 October 2009 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

This story is amazing and it would be sad to leave it like this. Please update. I don't know what or how you doing, but I hope that you'll continue with story. It's my favourite of all stories. Please pick up your 'pen' and write again. I have faith!

shadowfax · 8 August 2009 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

When will you update??? That is the question I have been asking myself ever since I came across this delightful fic...I read all the chapters together and the story is so wonderful and all the events meld so well together! I can't wait to see how Gondor goes for the ever confused couple...I also wonder where you are taking this story...waiting for some action too. Is this story going with canon...because the sea longing seems to suggest so. But then Rhinure's fate seems doomed then! Please do continue!

LORE · 27 April 2009 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

I read this back when you updated. Please please please update again! I've been checking. I love the bit about their children. I'd love for them to have those children at some point.

Miss · 10 April 2009 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

Nice! Thanks for the update, it's been awhile!

Modelspice · 31 October 2008 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

Thanks for posting up, but most importantly, I'm grateful that you haven't abandoned this fanfic. They're off to Gondor soon, dang mo, I think Rhinure won't be able to fight off Legolas's amorous advances there. Please don't let Rhinure get her defences down, I'm loving Legolas's frustrations etc, although eventually we all know what the outcome will be Thanks and take care

Magicfeather · 29 October 2008 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

OMG yes! I check this story for updates every now and then, and I actually didn't believe my eyes when I first saw this chapter! I absolutely LOVE this fanfic, and I was sad when it seemed to be abandoned. Thank you so much for proving me wrong! I'm also so happy to see the extended break hasn't affected your writing. I think the interaction between Rhinure and Legolas is very well crafted, you can really feel the tension between them. And all this talk of children! You shocked me there; though I also went "Awww!" out loud at the two of them. So cute! I can't wait to see what you come out with next, and once again, 'Thank you!' for not giving up on this story! Magicfeather

MELINDA · 25 October 2008 · Chapter 11: A Journey of a Thousand Miles

Hi. I haven't even read this chapter and I already love it!!! I gave up on this story a long time ago. I'm thrilled you decided to post again! Thanks!!!!

Magicfeather205 · 27 July 2008 · Chapter 10: Discontent and First Steps

I've read both Moriquendi and this story and thoroughly enjoyed them. You have a style that is easy and enjoyable to read and your plot always keeps me guessing. I've also found myself growing increasingly attached to your characters - Arandur is my favourite! I hope that you have not abandoned this story and that we will see an update soon. I cannot wait until the trip to Gondor. Keep writing!

Chelsea · 20 January 2008 · Chapter 10: Discontent and First Steps

Words do not describe how much I enjoy this story, every time I read a new chapter I just love this story that bit more. I really enjoyed this chapter and it was so great to finally have some communication between them, they really do work so well together. Rhinure seems to get more interesting every chapter, and while I initially started reading this story because I was fond of Legolas’ character, Rhinure has undoubtedly become my favourite character in this story. I really can’t wait for the next chapter, please say it will be soon!

annie · 26 December 2007 · Chapter 10: Discontent and First Steps

Are we ever going to get an update........................................

Nimue · 22 May 2007 · Chapter 10: Discontent and First Steps

Aww, i loved you stories, post more soon. If this was a book i would say it was a page turner but since is not, well... i couldnt stop reading, i cant wait for a new update. I like the way you make the characters human (i know that they are elves), what i mean is thst you show them, not as sappy but still perfect, you show that they have flaws. And i loved it how you joined relationships and politics, and how that afects those who have great responsability. So far I've loved all your stories. I look forward to the next chapters. ^-^

Idhreniel · 21 May 2007 · Chapter 10: Discontent and First Steps

Oh my... I love the way it ends. Nice chapter! I like the fact that Legolas is able to talk... Rhinure was so hard on Cothion... she was firm and correct. Thought as the Sacrifice. It was a great dialogue! Thanks for the update!!!