Irrepressible Pippin by PIppinfan1988
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PipMer
· 23 October 2007
· Chapter 5: The Learning Curve
This was such a heart-warming tale, Pippinfan! I love your young Merry and Pippin, and how they help each other out even in their early youth.
I liked how you fleshed out the character of Mr. Breddo, and how you showed that even adult hobbits can do some growing and maturing.
Your description of Pippin's boredom during a nice, spring day rang true for me; it reminded me of when I had to take chemistry in college in the spring semester, and the lab portion of the class was held on Friday afternoon! That was pure torture, and I could just feel young Pippin's restlessness.
Nice job!
Nice job!
Grey Wonderer
· 24 January 2004
· Chapter 5: The Learning Curve
This was very good and lots of fun. I am glad the tutor turned out to be a nice old hobbit after all!
Author's reply
Good old Merry and Pippin are always full of charm and wit! No one can stay too peeved at them for long....
Grey Wonderer
· 24 January 2004
· Chapter 1: The Great Escape
A very good beginning! Glad you continued it instead of ending at the one chapter. The tutor is a bit strict isn't he? I hope the lads have fun!
Author's reply
Thank you! Yeah, old Breddo is a bit of a...jerkwad in the beginning.
calenore
· 23 January 2004
· Chapter 5: The Learning Curve
Oh, that's so cute! I love little Pippin stories; he's so adorable! I wish I could just jump out of the window at my school, but i would DEFINITELY hurt myself doing that.
Author's reply
Thank you, calenore! Me, too, about the little Pippin stories windows. My schools always had three levels to them! Actually, I find it's fun to write about them as children; their pranks and misbehavior are limitless! Thanks again.
Pippinfan
Author Reply: Gosh--one false move with the fingers and wham! An entire word is deleted! I did have the word 'and' between 'stories' AND 'windows'! :-)
PF