Reviews (2)

Lianna · 25 July 2004 · Chapter 19: An Historical Encounter

Splendid story. I enjoyed it very much. I must admit that some readers will probably contend that having both injury and grief occur in Valinor is non-canon, but personally, I don't care. You need to have something with which to create a plot, and in my opinion, a Valinor in which nothing even slightly unpleasant ever happens would be a dull place indeed. I love your versions of both Thranduil and Legolas. It's great that your Thranduil is not nasty, and your Legolas is not a weakling or a victim. I am jealous of both of their wives! One aspect of your story that I especially liked was that you were able to show that your characters had active and enjoyable sex lives without ever going beyond the boundaries of good taste. I so rarely see this in fanfiction. So many authors either write smut or avoid sex altogether. I'm glad that you don't find either of those extremes necessary.

Culiwen · 9 October 2003 · Chapter 10: Wounds Are Healed

I am enjoying this story very much, as I have enjoyed your other stories that I have read. One aspect of your writing that I have noticed that you could improve on is your use of the word "to." Often, you use "to" when "too" is actually the appropriate term. For future reference, use "too" when expressing degree (e.g. "too much" not "to much"), or when using as a synonym for "also" (e.g. "I am going to the store, too." not "I am going to the store, to."). You may use "to" in almost all other instances of this word (except, of course, when you mean the number "two").