Even Elves Can Fall by Yuna_Dax
Nikara · 30 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
Awesome story! I noticed the way that Legolas was standing as well, and I hoped that someone would write about it. By the way, I think that the twins may be in the movie after all. There are two elves reforging the shards of Narsil. They look very similar, and both have dark hair. What other elves would have stayed in Rivendell when it is obvious that it is basically deserted? The twins of course!
Nilmandra · 30 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
I've only seen the movie one time, but when I go back for a second viewing, I'll have to watch for that scene. This was a nice explanation for what might have happened.
Karri · 28 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
Nicely done! I wondered about the awkward position of Legolas's arms in that scene as well. That's a good explanation. :-)
Orophins Dottir · 28 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
I like this story. Unlike the more benevolent Jay of Lasgalen, I cannot forgive the absence of Elladan and Elrohir in RotK! I am Scottish. We tend not to forgive. I will have to note the scenes you mention on my next viewing. Little one, just a small proofreading for you: It should be "steel" not "steal" when referring to weapons! (Would you like a list of the egregious mistakes I have made in my own prose?) Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
Thanks for pointing out that small error, it was something I trusted my spellchecker to pick up and it didn't! Alas it has been fixed :) I'm glad someone feels as strongly about the absence of the Twins in ROTK... it certainly made me angry! Cheers Jules AKA YunaDax
Stephanie-Lou · 28 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
I've been trying to leave a review all day but my computer is very screwed up, so im writing this on my neighbours computer! I love this story, (after all im very partial to a bit of Legolas angst with twin angst on the side) and I havnt even seen RotK yet, so im definately going to be looking out for THAT sene in it! Keep writing! Stephanie-Lou
Jay of Lasgalen · 28 December 2003 · Chapter 1: Chapter One - The Battle Goes Ill
I love to see your stories - full of angst! I've only seen ROTK once so far, so didn't notice that scene. I'll look out for it next week when I go again. And THANK YOU for putting the twins back where they belong! I understand why PJ left them out, they're not vital to the story, but I was still disappointed when he confirmed they wouldn't be there. Jay
Author's reply
Hi Jay, I'm glad to hear someone was as peaved as I was at PJ leaving the twins out of the movie. Although the play a small part in the books, the roles they bring to the story are important, particularly when it comes to the Rangers and bearing Aragorn the Sword. As for the Angst, my fellow partner in crime, there can never be enough of it! Cheers Jules AKA YunaDax