Reviews (144)

Sulwing of Mirkwood · 22 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

I just read the entire story for the first time...loved every bit of it! Legolas, Elladan, and Elrohir stories are the best, and you write the best of those! I think I want to get one of those bows though... :)

Selene Aduial · 15 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

This is the first time I saw this story and I must say I'm sorry I never noticed it before. The friendschip between the three of them is very well written. Somehow they do have a tendency to get into trouble don't they? I do have one point to correct you on. When Legolas inspects the bows he shoots an imaginary arrow. This is something you should never do!! You never release a bow without an arrow and it is vey bad for a bow to do that, it can actually shatter the bow.

Robinscat · 9 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

That was just the perfect finishing touch to your story. I had to go back and read the whole thing again, of course. I liked the touches of preminisions when Legolas was dreaming of Glorfindel and the Balrog. Sent shivers down my spine.

elliska · 8 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

Oh my gosh! I forgot about this fic. It was the first story that you wrote that I read, way back when I was just lurking here. I absolutely love this story. Now that I done with my comprehensive exams for school, I have time, so I think I'll go back and read it straight through. This was a great ending though. I love Legolas's reaction. And Thranduil and Legolas's relationship all through this story, and in this chapter in particular, is just amazing. You show how close they are and how much they mean to one another so well. Great ending!

Lianna · 7 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

This is exactly right. Just the way I would have imagined it. It also reminds me of the scene in the movie where Legolas receives a new, larger bow as a gift just before leaving Lothlorien. I imagine that in addition to admiring the excellent craftsmanship of his new bow, he also realized that its longer length made it a better bow for him to use during the remainder of the Quest -- where he would not be shooting from the trees in the way that Mirkwood elves usually do.

Elena Tiriel · 7 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

What a lovely vignette, Jay! I like that Legolas is so excited that he becomes tongue-tied, and that it takes him a couple of tries before he adjusts to the new draw. And Thranduil's final words are just how I see his character. Nicely done! - Barbara

Dot · 7 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

This is gorgeous! I love how Thranduil teases Legolas when his son is lost for words. And I laughed at Legolas’ very serious assessment of the bow: “This is a little shorter than the ones you gave Elladan and Elrohir,” he noted with approval. “It will be much better to use in the trees – theirs would be too long.” Such a wood-elf ;-) And that last line! Aaw! This is really lovely, Jay.

Ces · 7 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

Oh, Jay, thank you! It is the perfect ending to that story! I imagine that Legolas didn't eat much that night and practiced until Thranduil forced him to get some sleep. I love the adolescent Legolas, Arwen, Elladan and Elrohir. You capture them perfectly. Thanks! Ces

daw the minstrel · 7 March 2009 · Chapter 9999: The Third Bow

Nice addition, Jay. The kid is ready for it. PS. "Third" has an inverted letter in it for the chapter title. I just this second noticed it.

pipinheart · 29 June 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

I've read this story all the way through..A page turner,I couldn't put it down.... Keep up the great writing....

nimolin · 30 April 2005 · Chapter 1: Greenwood The Great

Very cute and funny, Keep writing!

Farawyn · 7 March 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Absolutely wonderful.

lmw · 27 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

I have been following this story for a while (not 2+ years tho') and thoroughly enjoyed it. Well done, keep writing!

elliska · 26 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

This was a wonderful story and I am sorry to see it end. I loved how you portrayed both Legolas and Thranduil longing for the forest at the opening and closing of the chapter. And I loved the descriptions of the bows. Man! I want one of those! The presentation of the gifts and everything surrounding it was very nicely done. As I said, sorry ot see it end.

Nilmandra · 26 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Yeah, you finished! And it was a good end. I like the bows, and I am glad that Thranduil had one made for Legolas as well. And I cannot help but wonder how long it will be before the parents learn the whole truth of what happened with the troll!

Bodkin · 26 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Ahh. All's right with the world. The hankering for home just gets you sometimes - no matter where you are and how gorgeous it is. I think Legolas might change his mind about Lanatus within a couple of minutes of the reunion, however. Good thing Thranduil wasn't so busy visiting trolls, scrubbing pots and so on that he forgot the bows - which sound lovely. And a nice response from the twins. Well, this one is finished and they are on their way home. What's next?

Dot · 25 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Oh, what a lovely ending! Your descriptions of Imladris sound beautiful but I love the longing that both Legolas and Thranduil have for home. There’s such a wonderful sense of their woods being a part of them and I could almost feel Thranduil’s ache at being away for too long. I had to laugh at Thranduil’s silence speaking volumes when he surveys Legolas’ room. That “expressive silence” is one I well remember from my own childhood! Good old Thranduil. I was wondering about the bows. They sound magnificent and I just love the idea of the subtle differences between the two. Legolas’ reaction made me smile. I was hoping that Thranduil would have something up his sleeve for his son too! And it says a lot about Legolas that despite his understandable envy, he can still be so thrilled for his friends. Poor Elrohir seemed very troubled about his missing bow! And what a great actor Legolas is! Thranduil’s very generous. It was good of him to give gifts to the whole family. I’m still laughing at that moment when Elrohir and Legolas think Thranduil knows about their latest escapade! Poor Thranduil must have wondered why Elrohir looked so horrified! The reaction of the twins was written so well. It was very touching and a lovely moment between them all. And yay, Legolas will get a gift! It all ends well, Elladan, Elrohir and Legolas somehow survived and what the parents don’t know won’t trouble them! Wonderful story, Jay. I’m looking forward to re-reading it in its entirety and this last chapter was just perfect. :-)

Galimeril · 25 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Wonderful! Stupendous! Perfect! Enchanting! and all those other words that mean you story! I just loved it! You have to write more! Congtratulations on a piece that is Very well written and entertaining! May the wind be at your back and your fire always warm! Galimeril ;D

Lianna · 25 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Sorry to see this story end, but I enjoyed every chapter. And I'm so glad that Legolas will be getting a bow, too -- though it was good for him to have to conceal his envy for a little while. Elrohir's horror when he thought that Thranduil knew about the rising river incident was great, too. There have really been an awful lot of incidents involving rivers; no wonder Elrohir and Legolas were confused. I don't think that either Legolas or the twins should be allowed anywhere near water -- maybe not even a bathtub. I laughed when Legolas remembered to check the bathroom while packing. Thranduil has trained him well. I've been trying to teach that particular lesson to my own kids for years! I hope we'll be seeing more of Legolas and the twins soon -- and Thranduil, too.

daw the minstrel · 25 February 2005 · Chapter 32: Homeward Bound II

Wonderful story, Jay! I do love your characters. Your Thranduil is impressive, and your young people are honorable and earnest and real. Thank you for this story.

gil-estel · 8 December 2004 · Chapter 29: The River Wild

im so glad there safe, now however i need to sleep...school tomorrow! great chapter! I luved it!

gil-estel · 7 December 2004 · Chapter 26: And The Winners Are ...

how kool! i luved this chapter!

gil-estel · 7 December 2004 · Chapter 24: The Games

lol, poor legolas, thats happened to me before...only not with archery...lets just say it didnt go to well...

gil-estel · 7 December 2004 · Chapter 23: The Lord's Little Rascals

i was reading this on ff.net...but due to a mistake i cant log in anymore...but then, you led me to this site! thanks so much! I really luv this story tho, and i was going to review you on ff.net...but... lol, anyway, i think this chapter is awesome! This whole story is awesome! ill go read the rest now...lol! GE

Dot · 6 December 2004 · Chapter 31: Confession

I’m sure I mean to re-read this story after the last update and never did – it’s great to see it back, though! That punishment really was nasty. Hats off to them for doing it without complaint, especially as they could hear such enticing sounds from the feast. I loved your description of it in the opening paragraph, by the way. I don’t know if I’ve said it before but I’ve always admired your gift with language – you so often have such lovely sentences that make me want to read them aloud. Those lines about the work they had to do are so smooth and just roll off my tongue. Poor Elrohir. I suppose any guilt he felt was bound to be intensified when he realised exactly what the other two were missing. And deceiving his father must be weighing on his conscience. I don’t think I’ll ever feel adult enough to let my parents in on some of the things I did – but then, my escapades never involved trolls or raging water!! I guess, though, that at his age any knowledge that he did wrong is also going to be coupled with a fear that his father will find out later. I really liked the idea that the kitchen overseer (great term, btw!), Elrond, Celebrían and Thranduil were all looking after the three being punished! All three seem to have a very strong sense of honour and duty and their parents can at least be proud of how well they completed their punishment. Well, thank heavens for Glorfindel! I think Legolas needs someone like that. Although, he does have a closer relationship with his father because he doesn’t have anyone else, I suppose… But anyway, it can’t have helped Elrohir not to be able to share his strange experience with someone who might understand. Glorfindel must have been utterly horrified to hear about the troll encounter and I thought it was good that he reacted so angrily at first because it probably drove home to Elrohir what a dangerous thing he did and how his parents would react if they knew. But what was particularly touching was the fact that Glorfindel quickly realises how upset and overwhelmed Elrohir is and points out how well he reacted in an unpredictable situation. I hadn’t thought about it like that until now either. I think Elrohir has definitely learned his lesson and was at the point where he just needed reassurance. So yay for Glorfindel! Alright, I’ll stop mindlessly rambling now! This was great and I look forward to the next chapter of whatever story you choose! :-)