Tales from the Great Wood: Naugrim by fael bain

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lwarren · 10 May 2005 · Chapter 11: Epilogue - Redemption

What a resourceful elfling! No wonder he drives Sen and his Adar stark, raving crazy! I liked this...especially Legolas' resolve to redeem himself in his family's eyes. Great! linda

Author's reply

Thank you, Linda! I'm glad you enjoyed it, and yes, Legolas is quite the little devil, isn't he? =) x

Galimeril · 19 April 2005 · Chapter 10: Contest

Excellent Chapter, I see that Legolas has won again. This kinda reminds me of the man who fooled the giant into thinking that he could squeeze water out of a rock when it was only cheese, and that he could throw a stone so hogh up that it wouldn't come down because it was really a bird. This was great, and Im looking foreward to the next update! Galimeril ;D

Author's reply

Hello! Thanks, and i'd completely forgotten about that story until you brought it up! Yes, I guess it just goes to show we're all hoping to be Davids who triumph over Goliaths at the end of the day, huh? =) x

rogueelfofdarkness · 18 April 2005 · Chapter 10: Contest

Tricksy elf - very tricksy! Keep writing, this is great.

Author's reply

heehee, thanks very much. I've just got a wee bit left now before it's done! x

loopy · 6 April 2005 · Chapter 9: Negotiations

I am enjoying this, too, but don't wait too long before taking up Shadow, please!

Author's reply

Hi loopy, nice to see you around! I'm in the process of getting the first few chapters of Shadow beta-ed, so that should please you. Enjoy Naugrim in the meantime! x

Galimeril · 26 March 2005 · Chapter 8: Disgrace

Wow! I never thought that such coldness would come of that! Geeze! I know Thranduil doesn't like dwarves, but my goodness, show a little love! I'm almost afraid, what is Leoglas planning? I don't like the sound of it, It seems like more trouble! Careful Legolas! Update really soon, don't keep in in suspense you evil cliffie user!

Author's reply

Hehe, I went skiing for a week, so you'd have to excuse the lateness of the next chapter. It's almost done, though! Legolas has lots up his sleeve, so stay tuned for more! ;) x

Galimeril · 22 March 2005 · Chapter 7: Prisoners

Wonderful! You write so well! I love this story, but it makes me cry! Please update soon! Galimeril ;D

Author's reply

Thank you, Galimeril. I'm sorry that you found the story a little upsetting, but it will get better soon! Legolas isn't going to take something like this lying down! =) x

Elf771 · 8 March 2005 · Chapter 6: Search

Oh, please continue to write. This is very well written and I enjoy the plot as well. Just as I imagined ELgolas as a child, rebellious! Though, I don't know a six year old would act so bold, I can assure you my brother does NOT!:) Anyway, please write more. Cheers!

Author's reply

Thanks for the review! I'm afraid I can't tell you very much about children, even though I'm supposedly doing a course on child development, eurgh. I guess I would envisage him as having the body of a 6-year old human child, but an older mentality? I think Tolkien mentioned that Elves have a wisdom that mortals do not have, right from the day that they were born. (I actually sound like I know what I'm talking about, but I assure you that I don't ;)) x

Galimeril · 7 March 2005 · Chapter 6: Search

Oh lovely! I've been waiting ages for the next chapter! Please update soon! This is such a good story, just stop using the EVIL CLIFFIES!!! Till next time! Galimeril ;D

Author's reply

Yeah, oops, sorry, got side-tracked by this and that! I'm almost done with the next chapter, which should be up soon, though! =) In the meantime, if you're bored, I'd recommend my other stories, hehe. x

Elf messenger · 13 October 2004 · Chapter 5: Captive

Wow, that little guy has spirit. He also has a very impressive list of names to call them, sindarin or westron. I can't wait until your next chapter! Namarie. Elf messenger

Galimeril · 26 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Trouble

Keep Going, I'm really enjoying this story, as stories that involve elflings are some of my favorites. I hope you update soon, Galimeril

Author's reply

Thanks for the review, Galimeril, and I hope you enjoy whatever the Elflings get up to next! x

Elf messenger · 17 August 2004 · Chapter 4: Trouble

Legolas is a very clever elf, using his mischeif for annoyance and escpae. I can't wait until your next chapter! Namarie. Elf messenger

Author's reply

Thanks for the review, as usual! Hope you don't find what Legolas does too unbelievable! x

Elf messenger · 9 June 2004 · Chapter 3: Orc-Hunt

Oh, the first appearance of Caeriel. Obviously the friendship is forged some time later=). Can't wait till your next chapter! Until then. Namarie. Elf messenger

Author's reply

Yes, it's not a very good start for the young-ones, isn't it? Glad you enjoyed it!

Elf messenger · 18 March 2004 · Chapter 2: Liberty

Good chapter. Legolas is Quite the astute one. I can't wait until your next chapter! Until then, Namarie. Elf messenger

Author's reply

Hi, nice to see you again! As always, glad you enjoyed it, and yes Legolas is quite clever, isn't he? ;)

Saturn's Hikari · 15 March 2004 · Chapter 2: Liberty

Hi! I like this! Cute! THough I have yet to see any Naugrim!^^ Hint hint: Update more! ^^ -Saturn's Hikari

Author's reply

Hi! Yes, patience, my friend, I promise they'll be making an apperance soon, although if people review more it'll help speed things up considerably! ;)

Elf messenger · 10 February 2004 · Chapter 1: Jailbreak

Ooo the little rebel;). I like your story and I can't wait to see what happens to the two elflings. I hope you can post soon! Namarie. Elf messenger

Author's reply

Sorry for the late reply, and also for not updating it, I promise Chapter 2 will be here soon! :D

rgbj · 9 February 2004 · Chapter 1: Jailbreak

Well that was a cute start to what I hope is a nice little Legolas story. I am such a sucker for cute little Legolas I will definitely be tuning in for more.

Author's reply

Thanks for the review, glad you liked it, and yes, little Legolas is sweet, although it will (knowing me) get darker, oh well! lol!

Layton Colt · 9 February 2004 · Chapter 1: Jailbreak

This is really cute! I hope you continue. :D

Author's reply

Hiya! Thanks for the review, glad you like young Leggy! :)