The Wrong Path by White Wolf
Nikara · 6 December 2003 · Chapter 7
Poor Estel. I have a feeling that those last words will not be true. Very nice chapter. More please!
Author's reply
Yes well, there has to be a story, doesn't there? I can say no more. :o) Glad you like the chapter. Fear not. There will be "much, much" more.
Eruanna · 5 December 2003 · Chapter 7
No fair! You are very evil... (In a good sort of way!) ;-) Poor Legolas; always the victim of evil plots. Good cliffies...as usual. Once again, another chapter I can't find fault with! Would that such were true for my own stories... ;-)
Author's reply
I guess being evil in a good sort of way is a compliment. I'll take it that way. Yes, there are a lot of us who do awful things to Legolas. Poor baby. I'm happy you like the chapter. It is one of my own favorites. I didn't see your name on the author's list. I would like to know what stories you have written, and why they are not here. Are they not LOTR fics?
Sivan · 5 December 2003 · Chapter 7
Nice continue. I think that he'll not be the same elf that he was. I still love what I read. Please update soon, this is so good story. Sivan
Author's reply
Comment #1: Thank you. Comment #2: I can't reveal what will happen until it happens. But, I'm sure you already knew that, didn't you? :o) Comment #3: I'm glad you are still loving it. Comment #4: I'll update Saturday. I'm glad you think it's good. That makes me very happy. Author Reply: Oops. I meant to say I'd update Sunday.
Orophins Dottir · 5 December 2003 · Chapter 7
Hmmm, interim stage to awake had an evil snake. Nope. We don't trust you. This is not going to go well for our prince. Excuse me, I think I shall just tiptoe off and alert my liege. Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
Not trust me? I'm wounded. Actually, that is a compliment. I don't like being predictable. Here's a hint for you. YOu don't have to alert Thranduil.
Sivan · 4 December 2003 · Chapter 6
Legolas will be alright like before or turned to the evil? On the last chapter (5) there was a line of "He'll come to us soon" if I'm not mistake. There wil be a suprise I guess on chapter 7, right? I still love what I right. Sivan
Author's reply
Now, I "know" you don't want me to tell you what is going to happen. :o) It's a long story, so hang on. There will be a lot of surprises along the way.
Nikara · 3 December 2003 · Chapter 6
Elladan, Elrohir, and Estel aren't the only ones puzzled by what Elrond said. He didn't reveal enough in his conversation with Glorfindel! Now I will have to wait until the next chapter for some answers.
Author's reply
I'm sorry you were evidently disappointed by the fact that Elrond didn't give all the answers during his conversation with Glorfindel. I hope your puzzlement will be cleared up as the story unfolds.
sofia · 3 December 2003 · Chapter 6
very good. u keep me waiting for whats going to happen. No!
Author's reply
I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you continue to want more.
Orophins Dottir · 3 December 2003 · Chapter 6
Welcome back! Now, get Elf Boy awake for goodness' sake! At least, I think I want him awake. You are evil, though. Perhaps awake will be worse? Poor Elrond. Guilt and Thranduil headed his way. Think I shall jump back a few chapters and re-read in preparation for my favorite king's arrival. I want to be clear on just why he's hitting Elrond about the head! Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
I'll let you decided if being awake is better or worse. :o) I'm hoping, if you are a Thranduil fan, that you will like my version of the woodland King, especially as a father. I'll give yo a clue: I rather like Thranduil myself.
Orophins Dottir · 30 November 2003 · Chapter 5
Frightening. The fear of all is palpable. Please continue!
Author's reply
Glad you thought it was frightening. That was my intent. I will definitely continue.
Sivan · 26 November 2003 · Chapter 5
Nice chapter, you continued this very good, now please hurry up with the next chapter. I still love what I read, Sivan
Author's reply
I'm glad you are still loving it. Naturally, I hope you will think it gets better, as it does along. I'll update when I return from my trip.
Nikara · 25 November 2003 · Chapter 5
Who is the he? Legolas? Aragorn? Elrond? I personally suspect the last one. Great chapter. Where exactly did all of that blood come from? Internal bleeding, of just severe biting of the lip? More soon please!
Author's reply
Glad you like the chapter. There's a clue who the 'he' is in the part about Mordraug, if you want to look for it. If not, don't worry. It will be revealed in a later chapter. With Legolas clawing around inside his mouth, it's for certain, in my mind anyway, that he opened up a few blood vessels that bled freely. If all goes as planned, I'll be updating on Dec. 3rd.
sofia · 25 November 2003 · Chapter 5
wow. i love how the story's comin along... with the blood from legolas it made the story creepy & even more better.
Author's reply
I'm glad you like the progress the story is making. I wanted the part with the blood to be a bit of a shock. Wait until you find out what is behind it all.
Nikara · 23 November 2003 · Chapter 4
Grr... That is a horrible cliffy! I can't believe that you left off there! Poor Estel. I hope that you add to this soon, you have left me desparate for more!
Author's reply
Well, I see that my horrible cliffy has succeeded. They make good grabbers to bring desperate readers back. :o) However, I think the story itself has a lot more to do with that than cliffies, and I'm trying hard to give everyone a good read. How's tomorrow for the next update?
Orophins Dottir · 23 November 2003 · Chapter 4
You CANNOT do this to me! I leave town Tuesday morning and will have no access to a computer until Saturday evening. You must get me off this cliffie before then. ARRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGH!! *draws a deep and calming breath as befits a resident of Taur-E-Ndaedelos* Excellent chapter. Broke my heart, and I am considering revenge upon you, but still excellent. Humble Scribe to this Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
I'm happy you liked the chapter. I hate that you will have to wait so long to find out what is happening to Legolas. I am updating tomorrow afternoon, US Central Time. Please don't seek retribution. I promise all will be revealed---eventually. :o) If you are an American, I wish you a happy and safe Thanksgiving.
Eruanna · 23 November 2003 · Chapter 4
*gasp* WHATHAPPENSWHATHAPPENSWHATHAPPENS!!! I love this brilliant piece of writing! The plot line develops extremely well, and I happen to LOVE Legolas angst. (Can't help it; it's a sadistic pleasure.) ;-) Anyway, wonderful portrayal of Aragorn's character. I too loved the 'something light' quote. Pippin would indeed be most pleased. The story is evolving in a breathtakingly mysterious way. Nice cliff hangers. Poor Legolas! Post soon!
Author's reply
Thandk you for the complement on my writing. I try hard to be entertaining. Speaking of the food thing, I just recieved and watched the exptende version of TTT. I love the bit at the end with Maery and Piooin and the floating apples. Too bad that wasn't in the theatrical release. My favorite part, also left out, was the funny bit where Legolas and Gimli 'settle' their count of enemies killed at Helm's Deep. That was a riot. Oops. I digress. I hope you find the rest of the story appealing. It's a long and bumpy ride, with much angst, humor, horror and surpises. Author Reply: Please forgive the typos. My fingers and my Spell Checker went on vacation. I, of course, know how to spell Merry and Pippin.
Sivan · 23 November 2003 · Chapter 4
O.k. now you'll have to update soon. Another cliffy, but please hurry up and update soon. I still love what I read, Sivan Shemesh
Author's reply
I'm glad you are loving the story. I will update soon, so you will know what is happening, just not why---yet. I must keep some of the mystery going. :o)
Nikara · 21 November 2003 · Chapter 3
Poor baby. I'm sure that this story is going to be angst filled. Do we get to look into Legolas' head soon? I hope so!
Author's reply
Poor baby, indeed. Angst filled? Oh my, yes. Get into Legolas's head? Stay tuned.
Orophins Dottir · 21 November 2003 · Chapter 3
I give up. I've put you on my update alert list. I have to know what has befallen our prince. "Just something light. Fruit, maybe, and honey tea. And cheese. And some bread and maybe a few sausages." Aragorn of the hobbit appetite! Pippin would be so proud. I loved the trees: "Please, send your strength to Legolas. Renew his spirit, so he can come back to us---and to you." Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
I'm so thrilled you put me on your alert list. Thank you. I like to put some humor in the story from time to time to break up the drama a bit. And yes, Pippin would be proud of Aragorn's menu. I guess it's a good thing I didn't add a second breakfast, or poor Aragorn would have popped. I thought Aragorn would have been desperate enough to implore the trees to help Legolas, if they could.
sivan · 21 November 2003 · Chapter 3
More, so good... Sivan
Author's reply
I'm glad you like it. There will be much, much more.
Sivan · 20 November 2003 · Chapter 2
Wonderful, so wonderful story. Will you hurry up and update soon? Good cliffies btw. I love what I read, just keep it coming. Sivan
Author's reply
Thank you for your kind words. I'm so happy you are loving the story. I love leaving cliffies, although not every chapter will have one. I plan on posting Chapter 3 tomorrow (Friday).
Orophins Dottir · 20 November 2003 · Chapter 2
Welcome to Stories of Arda! It is a lovely part of the woodland and the fair Web Elfs will make you most welcome and answer all of your questions. They are quite remarkably responsive. Now, UPDATE! We must know what is happening to Legolas. Such mystery. Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil
Author's reply
Thank you for your welcome. It is lovely here, and I'm glad I came. I think I'll stay. Stick with me, and you will, indeed, find out what is happening to Legolas. I hope you enjoy discovering it.
Nikara · 19 November 2003 · Chapter 2
Sounds very interesting and mysterious! Keep it up!
Author's reply
I'm glad you find the story interesting. As for the mystery, it will deepen.
websterans · 19 November 2003 · Chapter 1
Tempting start--please continue
Author's reply
I'm glad you are tempted. I hope I can pull you in further with succeeding chapters. I will post the next one tomorrow.
Karri · 18 November 2003 · Chapter 1
Greetings! A wonderfully mysterious beginning, beautifully written. Glad you found your way over to Arda. :-)
Author's reply
Thank you, Karri, for your kind words. You have always said nice things about my writing, and I appreciate it. You were the first to welcome me at ff.net, and now you are the first to welcome me here. I'm happy to be here.