Anonymous · 22 October 2004 · Chapter 2: Bright Evening
*applauds* FABULOUS!! I am just starting to explore the world of LOTR FanFic and I must say I am extremely impressed!!!
Long Awaited by Cantora Eledhwen
Reviews (6)
Pearl Took · 5 December 2003 · Chapter 2: Bright Evening
Cantora, This was sweet! I do so like stories of Merry and Pippin's first meeting. Well done! Pearl Took
Marilla · 25 November 2003 · Chapter 2: Bright Evening
Oh good, you've put the second chapter back up. And it's every bit as sweet as the first chapter promised :) . Where'd Regina come from, though? I'd be interested in hearing more about her, and why (in your universe) she didn't end up married to Frodo, as you seem to imply in this chapter. Although I think that they're probably a little bit too young for them to be thinking about getting married - Frodo's only 22 you know. Also, if you ever think of adding to this story, maybe you could put in an idea of why Pippin is nicknamed that? It's not, after all, as obvious a nickname for "Peregrin" as Merry is for Meriadoc.
Marilla · 14 November 2003 · Chapter 1: Dark Day
Poor little Merry! I like this first chapter, but whatever happened to chapter 2?!? It was there when I started reading chapter 1, but when I went to read the next chapter, it had disappeared! Please fix it! This promises to be such a sweet story, and I'd like to finish it.
Author's reply
Oh gosh, I'm sorry! I actually hadn't meant to post chapter 2 for a couple of days... tweaking and all that. So I took it off, I had no idea someone was in the middle of reading the story! I added back on... it should be ok, but if you catch any typos or anything let me know. Thanks for reading! I can't believe out of however many hits I've gotten... 58 on the first chappie I think it is, only 2 separate people have taken enough time to review. I appreciate it so much! -Cantora
Chigger · 14 November 2003 · Chapter 2: Bright Evening
CUTE!!! So Merry has his "own" baby, now, huh? He let that new baby go to Gondor without him. Naughty, naughty, Merry. Still, I guess there's no arguing with a wizard over who goes where. A great story and I absolutely loved it. :)
Chigger · 14 November 2003 · Chapter 1: Dark Day
Poor little Merry! Come on, Frodo, go comfort the kid or something. Great story so far! I can't wait to finish it.