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| marinus stiria by bryn | 14 Review(s) |
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| Orophins Dottir | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 1/10/2004 |
| "But even a King was not capable of dismissing Death." You have killed Bergil. I am in awe. Methinks, you will hear about this one, Bryn. The only braver thing I have read is someone who killed off Frodo. (For my birthday, she is going to off Bilbo! Shhh! Never liked Bilbo. Bothered my liege and caused me headaches.) Seriously, the scene was effectively written. I knew I was in deep trouble by just the simple allusion to the look of horror in Legolas' eyes. Aragorn's fear was also quite effective. And, I think Bergil just might have mused about how odd people's faces looked while they were in the throes of death. Chilling. BTW, I could find you a safe house to hide in if the need arises! Forgot to ask in Cantrip review--Would you send me the E/Gilraen by email? Thanks. Humble Scribe to his Majesty Thranduil | |
| Imrahoil | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 1/10/2004 |
| Oh noooooooooooooooooooo. How could you do this! I don't mind (so much) if someone kills off one of the remaining Fellowship, they usually come back, don't they? But Bergil? He was such a wonderful character. *sniff* Does he perhaps come back? | |
| Miriel | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 1/10/2004 |
| My mouth is open in shock and tears fill my eyes. HOW IN GODS GREEN EARTH COULD YOU KILL BERGIL?!!!! Although, it tisn't God's green earth, it's Middle earth. But I'm still crying. :-( :'( *sniff* I guess you can update soon... Actually, please do update soon. :-) I'm going to go read "Cantrip" I need a pick-me-up after this. Well written except for the sadness. (I really am crying, BTW. And I am rarely moved to such emotion in reading.) | |
| e | Reviewed Chapter: 18 on 1/9/2004 |
| AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHLRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed him! That was entirely uncalled for! *considers* Actually, in the story it might have been unavoidable, but that does not excuse you in the least! Is that understood? You will have to make up for that by updating fast! For the rest of this story! | |