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Reach for the Stars  by Dreamflower 22 Review(s)
eilujReviewed Chapter: 5 on 11/17/2011
I am enjoying this strange mixture.

Author Reply: It is certainly a very strange mixture! It's quite fun to figure out what I want to put in and how to make it seem natural.

6336Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/22/2011
Well there were some people who regarded any other form of transportation than Shanks Pony or an actual pony as evil, so having the Black Riders in steam auto's would work, plus think of all the stink and dirt they can spread.

Did this ploanets inhabitants come up with space flight or are they colonists who wanted to get back to simpler things and times?

Keep it coming,
Lynda

Author Reply: Since I am not sure how well my word-limits are going to allow me to address the backstory, I will say that Suza was colonized (as was the actual Shire).

I'm glad you are enjoying this!

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 4 on 10/21/2011
O well done Dreamflower! This tale gets more and more engaging in the telling! Dare I ask if you plan to re-tell the whole trilogy?? That would be quite the undertaking, but you're definitely one of the authors I know would be up to it!

Uh-oh, just as our four get together there's trouble...well, it's not as though I didn't expect it...

A motorized Nazgul! Eek! *shudder*

Eagerly waiting for the next chapter,

Kaylee!!!

(By the way, you might want to double-check the chapter number in the List...)

Author Reply: Thanks! My cursor must've slipped down when I clicked and I didn't notice. Anyhow, now I should notice, since I went in and put word count for the chapter heading.

And yes, the plan is to continue through the Quest, though some things may change along the way.

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/20/2011
Dear Dreamflower,

Best to be wary, indeed! Hobbits with bicycles! I do love that image! No doubt they'd have gotten to Imladris much faster on them if they had them in the book! Heh...except for the carrying food issue, must think on that.

Professor Curunir, the head of his department...oh, that's just too funny! I wonder what will happen next...or rather, I know WHAT will happen, but HOW is another matter!

*giggles*

Going off to look for more,

Kaylee!!

Author Reply: Yes, the "how" is going to be a challenge! LOL!

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/20/2011
Dear Dreamflower,

This story is getting Better and Better! (And Longer and Longer, but that's the Way I Like It!! =) Miss Dora does too, I am Sure!)

Suza! I love it! I may not be an expert on Hobbits like yourself, but I did recognize that word...it is the Hobbits' own word for Shire, is it not?? I love how you make this work!

Reading on happily,

Kaylee!


Author Reply: Yes. Suza is the word for Shire. I decided to use JRRT's slightly less familiar nomenclature for characters/places-- everyone reading here is going to recognize most of them, but they will be used in just a very slightly different context to make them seem a bit different. But I'm trying not to be too exotic-- which is why I used periain for hobbits instead of kuduk. I want most readers to be able to recognize what it is and move on, instead of having to wrack their brains over it.

Kaylee ArafinwielReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2011
LOL! Dreamflower, this is going to be great, I can tell!!! I'm a fan of sci-fi, so let's see how this goes...Istarian! Heh!!!

(Off topic, how are Dear Miss Dora and her Book these days? I do so Like to Know These Things! =) )

Your Friend,

Kaylee!

Author Reply: Yes, I decided to make Gandalf an alien, LOL!

(I think Miss Dora's in a snit and not talking to me right now, since I am so busy with other people-- like Bilbo!)

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2011
Lord of the Rings meets Return of the Jedi?

It would only be fitting, since Lucas modelled SW on High Fantasy, if not LotR in particular.

Author Reply: *nods* And there will be some tips of the hat to other sorts of space opera/fantasy things as well. (And let's face it, all High Fantasy published since 1952 owes a tribute to LotR.)

6336Reviewed Chapter: 3 on 10/20/2011
Pity he wasn't a little more suspicious!

This is good, seems to be working!

Lynda

Author Reply: Well, he can't be too suspicious. This may be AU and outside my box, but I won't stray too far from the LotR roots. Glad you are liking it so far!

6336Reviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/20/2011
Bicycles?!

Lynda

Author Reply: I know! I just had this sudden image of Frodo and Sam on bicycles!

eilujReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/20/2011
Hey -- it works for me!

Author Reply: I'm still not sure about it! I'm definitely not used to something like this, which, OF COURSE, is the point of the whole exercise, LOL! I just hope I don't mess it up.

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