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Carefully Taught  by Linda Hoyland 52 Review(s)
shireboundReviewed Chapter: 18 on 11/11/2011
"This is a holy place," Faramir replied. "We need conceal nothing from the One who made us as we are."

Súlion immediately spread out his wings so that his markings were visible and preened.

I love those little details you give us. But every chapter makes me more and more worried!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I'm pleased you liked the glimpse of our vain dragon!I don't generally write AU if that is any comfort!

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/24/2011
A sad chapter, though all hope is not yet lost. One can feel the fatigue and sorrow of Aragorn and Arwen, as they watch their baby sicken further and cannot help her or understand what caused the illness. Looking forward to the next chapter!


Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review. I'm pleased I was able to convey how Aragorn and Arwen were feeling

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 17 on 10/4/2011
At least he is receiving proper guidance. The Lord of Lorien and Este are reaching him as they can.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I think Aragorn is very in tune with the Higher Powers.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 17 on 9/29/2011
Oh my goodness, how difficult to be a parent when your best efforts can't help your child. This is so suspenseful! *paces and frets*

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.I often wonder how on earth my parents survived my childhood!

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 16 on 9/12/2011
Oh, no--Farawyn so ill?

I'm glad my predictions regarding the oncoming dragons proved true. Now, to learn what is ill with Farawyn and to deal with it!

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.Yes, I fear poor Farawyn is very ill indeed. More is explained in my new chapter I've just posted.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 16 on 8/12/2011
He opened his eyes again and met his lord's kindly and concerned gaze.

I love the quiet, tender moments between these soul-friends.

Goodness, whatever is happening now? What a fascinating story.

Author Reply: Many thanks for your much appreciated review.
I just love writing tender moments for these two soul mates who have become as father and son.

I'm pleased you are finding the story fascinating.

Raksha The DemonReviewed Chapter: 15 on 7/2/2011
Uh-oh, Dragon Alert! The guys should have brought shields. Very big shields. Seriously, good chapter; and the tension of the last part really works well.

Author Reply: Thank you, I'm pleased you enjoyed this chapter and felt the ending worked well.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 15 on 7/2/2011
And why do I think these came to find Sulion and his rider? I think all will be pleased to know these new allies now!

Author Reply: All will be revealed in the next chapter!You might well be wiser than Aragorn and Faramir about these dragons.

shireboundReviewed Chapter: 15 on 7/1/2011
Oh those suspicious Men! I'm sure something wonderful is about to happen.

Author Reply: All will soon be revealed. You might well know better than Aragorn and Faramir concerning their visitors.

Author Reply: All will soon be revealed. You might well know better than Aragorn and Faramir concerning their visitors.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 14 on 6/21/2011
I do hope that Aragorn's pronunciation gave Fu Nung a good laugh--laughter can be a wonderful restorative, after all. And he is trying to communicate, which will help them all. And now to see if he can at least reduce the scars on Sulion's wings.

Poor man--separated from his wife and children over such a silly reason!

Author Reply: I hope Fu Nung had a good laugh too. My Chinese readers certainly thought Aragorn's Chinese was dire!If fu Nung can laugh and is no longer afraid he will recover from his wounds.

I feel very sorry for Aragorn.

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