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I Will Take It  by Agape4Gondor 16 Review(s)
VirtuellaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 8/2/2008
A chilling tale of how the power of the ring corrupts the mind. Well done!

Author Reply: Thank you. I could just see the poor Elf... and my heart broke. One of many destroyed by the Ring...


LaikwâlassęReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/30/2008
Well, Iīm rather new to this site, as a member not as a reader.
I like this story very much, albeit itīs very awesome but why should elves not be tempted by the ring ?
Iīm very puzzled over the elfīs identity. I donīt believe itīs one of the younger ones but that would point at Erestor or Glorfindel.

....Yet, Lord Elrond had my loyalty and love....,

Sounds as someone rather near to him.

Oh, itīs so frustrating. It sounds rather like Thranduil, but he was not present at the council...

anyway a great little story to think about.

Lai

Author Reply: Welcome as a new member. I really love this site for people respond - and as a writer - I need that response. Thank you for yours!

I'm sorry the story has created such angst within you - I really don't know who the Elf is - I only know he has served Elrond for many an age, but harbors a weakness like unto his Noldoran ancestors... If one considers Feanor weak.

Nope - I know it's not Thranduil - I do not believe he was Noldoran.

LarnerReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/29/2008
Aye, too easy indeed. Not Glorfindel, I think, as he was able to dwell in both realms at once. Another from among the Noldor, though. Hmmm. Lindor or Erestor, perhaps?

Author Reply: Lindor or Erestor... Good thoughts... but the answer is ever lost in silence... for the disgrace of it all for The Last Homely House... that such a thing was done whilst Frodo was under Elrond's protection. Yikes!

Jay of LasgalenReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/29/2008
Oh, I like this! Very thought-provoking - and there must have been some who questioned the wisdom of sending a hobbit off to Mordor to destroy the Ring.

Whose is the POV? I'm thinking Glorfindel, but it could be Erestor - not that either of them would ever be so treacherous!


Jay


Author Reply: Thanks, Jay! Coming from an Elf lover makes the review even more appreciated.

I really can't believe that Boromir was the only one with misgivings!

I wrote an A/N at the end - after receiving your review... It thought a wee explanation was needed.

Are you sure it's not the twins????????

Linda HoylandReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/28/2008
This was truly chilling!

Author Reply: To me too! I really felt bad for the Elf... not so much for Frodo - I think he'll wake up with a headache but that's about it...

AntaneReviewed Chapter: 1 on 7/28/2008
I'm glad the stolen items, shall we say, didn't get far! Or I hope that arrow came from the good guys and Frodo will soon be rescued.

Namarie, God bless, Antane :)

Author Reply: I'm very glad too - I got the idea - wrote the drabble - and then there was more and more... Once in awhile, the Muse tells me to leave the ending (and other details) up to the reader...

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