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The Seeds of Time  by daw the minstrel 181 Review(s)
Alison HReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/13/2007
That was a very bittersweet chapter, Daw.Lorellin is so loved by everyone that it breaks my heart to know that she will soon be gone from the side of her adoring husband and beloved sons.The loss is almost unbearable to think about and that is a testament to your incredible characters, that we care about them so much.

I really enjoyed Legolas' POV in this chapter;he is just learning to read the signs to when his brothers are angry or upset and he was quick to comfort Eilian by holding his hand.His observations were adorable.

Ithilden's voice sounded like fur? My, I would love to hear that!!

I wonder how Legolas will deal with his first funeral? I hope that the event won't be too much for him.Lorellin's objections were sound but he is the son of the King above all else.Thranduil will keep his eyes on his youngest, I think.

I'm glad you're posting again, Daw.As usual, your stories are always wonderful to read.I've been reading a few of your older stories lately and I missed your regular updates.I look forward to the next chapter.

Ali.

Author Reply: Thanks, Ali. This is the first time I've been in Lorellin's POV, I think. I've had to stop and try to work out how all this would look to her, how she would think, what would be important to her, and it's interesting for me.

Legolas is a sweetie. At first, I didn't have him going to the funeral, but my beta pointed out that I was writing about the duties of the king's sons, and this would probably be one of them even at this age.

I have a draft of a second original novel done and am letting it sit for a while, and it's Spring Break! So it's fanfic time.

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