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Hidden Agenda  by sheraiah 14 Review(s)
mystarlightReviewed Chapter: 12 on 6/23/2021
Love everything about to this story!!!

terraaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 1/29/2006
you are evil!

SilvertreeReviewed Chapter: 12 on 12/23/2005
I don't want to seem pushy or anything, but WHEN IS THE NEXT CHAPTER COMING!?!?!?!

SilvertreeReviewed Chapter: 12 on 11/21/2005
YOU might be evil, but OTHERS can be more evil if they are kept waiting for too long!Muwahahahahaha!!!!! (Poor imitation, I know)

BodkinReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/24/2005
I like the way Serai is settling into trusting the twins enough to tease them - and accepting the way they tease her. She is such a sweet character (- happy outcome, happy outcome!) The way they blame each other for her cheek is very big brotherly. She seems resigned to the elves knowing her condition - even the Queen. Not a bad thing.

At least Thranduil reduced the amount of poison Legolas swallowed - and he was in good health (if emotionally fraught) to start with. But poor Legolas - that nasty creep is hanging on waiting for him to die! You can't let that happen. Aragorn and the twins are doing the best they can, but I'm still keeping my fingers crossed.

Very sensible to have the hobbits do the catering. Rose and Sam won't allow any messing with the munchies. And I'm glad Luinloth has come to see that Gimli is an elf-friend through and through.

I hope Lithmor never gets to find out how long it takes to kill an elf. And that someone comes between him and the stupid kitchen maid. Preferably the truth.

lorell987Reviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
you are wicked and evil. I hate you! Evil cliffies!!!

sofiaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
I love the twins, have I told you that? I don't know why, but it seems I have a 'thing' for fictional twins and I LOVE reading about them! Okay... that was not relevant to the plot at all, I don't think. Love the chapter. Update soon, please!

harrowcatReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
TBC ? Yes I definitely think 'evil' is an apt description! Having just read straight through to this point - more please and SOOOOOOOOOOON!

ponypetterReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
I just read all of this. I love it, especially the part where the hobbits arrive. I can't wait until you post more!

elizaReviewed Chapter: 12 on 7/23/2005
Wow Sheraiah,
what a great chapter. Yep your villian is definitely a rat b*stard but he is a great villian and just like the movies some times a good "baddie" really makes the story. ( plus I just know he will get his in the end. LOL) I enjoy the twins, gimili and Thranduil also. It's nice to see them have nice parts in your story.

Not to long for an update OK.

Eliza

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