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marinus stiria  by bryn 3 Review(s)
Estel_Mi_OlorReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/25/2004
Argh sorry about that previous blank review. But I knew it was a Silmaril!!! That woman is crazy. Totally crazy. Poor Legolas...I foresee angst. And what's this story that you can't write angst? I'm torn, crying, etc. This is very angsty. Too much in fact. Argh, I must keep reading!!

EsReviewed Chapter: 2 on 1/25/2004

MirielReviewed Chapter: 2 on 10/13/2003
Bitaliel shows the uncaring attitude of one who has lost all hope. She rides not caring if she lives or dies. Why should she? Life is now meaningless. Her daughter is dead. Not dead by illness, no, that might have been better. For this death, this was preventable. This death should not have been.

On foot? She *REALLY* relishes the feeling of pain...

Interesting how the trees know of such a thing. (How is it they know of such a thing?) Oh no...who else has heard the whispers?

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