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Avon's Drabbles  by Avon 4 Review(s)
Marigold GamgeeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 3/20/2004
Aww.... sad, quite sad.

Unheard ChimeReviewed Chapter: 1 on 1/3/2004
This is wonderful... very poignant. I like his transition from childhood wonder to jarring reality. Very well written... congratulations.

Author Reply: Thank you! Real Frodo-experts have said it is bit more movie-Frodo than book-Frodo and they could be right - but I still think he was in that extended childhood of the well-to-do until all this happened.

Avon

Hiro-tyreReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/3/2003
Wow! These are very profound!

Author Reply: Thank you for the feedback.

Avon

LindeleaReviewed Chapter: 1 on 10/2/2003
Nicely done. The drabble and title go together hand-in-glove. This could very well be the stream of Frodo's thoughts as he steps forward. Lovely imagery, how well you evoke Shire life in just a few words!

Author Reply: *grin* I overwrote this, getting all descriptive, and had a terrible time getting it short enough ;-)

Thanks for the feedback.

Avon

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