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| Of Finrod and Bëor by losselen | 2 Review(s) |
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| PSW | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 8/22/2022 |
| Lovely, as they have all been. This makes me happy. :-) | |
| Raksha The Demon | Reviewed Chapter: 4 on 5/19/2022 |
| It's really cool, and rather appropriate, that Finrod names Men as the Second-born". Another beautiful chapter. I wish you'd break up that especially long verse into two smaller ones, though... Author Reply: thank you for reading! i re-read it, and maybe agree here. there should be a break after the description of cuivienen ends, maybe. | |