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Swan Song  by Conquistadora 3 Review(s)
PSWReviewed Chapter: 10 on 10/2/2022
I am to a point where I feel like Aragorn needs to be cracking a few more skulls (as it were). It’s all well and good to give people time to sort things out in their own, and it is a good idea to start things out, but this has gone beyond restless discontent to gross disrespect of the King’s will. That in itself should merit a bit of jail time, one would think. I kind of feel like he’s expecting the urban people of Gondor to respond to him in the way that the rural northern Dunedain would - I mean, I know he spent all that time in Gondor years ago and has some experience w these people … but it just seems like he’s giving them too much rope. Ah well … I’m sure I wouldn’t do a better job … :-D

lembas7Reviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/23/2018
Okay, now I'm heartbroken. I liked the fox. :(

PSWReviewed Chapter: 10 on 3/20/2018
Noooo .... *puts hand over eyes and watches from between fingers* I can see it all going south, and there seems to be nothing to stop it ...

Other than the blatant acts of sabotage, what a fantastic day. I loved your descriptions of the sport — would have loved to actually see those matches — and of course the other activities and diversions. What a great party. Such a shame that it all has to be ruined by people who can’t just be happy with the new prosperity.

I was wondering for quite a while just how long Beleg could be gone without anyone noticing ... :-P

Dinner to buy and make, then on to the next chapter. Thx for writing!

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